I am leaving myself to be with you (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

Outstanding love-poetry Bhuwan. Absolutely stunning

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

"I am leaving myself to be with you". The title along was worth pondering. But that is the selfless nature of love. Good job, Bhuwan.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Those first and last stanzas, Bhuwan!! Say it all, the phenomenon of knowing that you LOVE before knowing WHO you love and WHY!! That most mystical meeting of souls where somehow they kiss and ignite and become forever forged. Loved the idea of the presence felt in "the boulevard of your heart"... speaks of the joyous freedom of the wide-open space that that bubble of love creates around your conscious existence - just beautiful AS EVER!!!!! Kate XXXX

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

This is a soul write Bhuwan...
and I hope you find your soulmate...
and a wonderful one as you truly
do deserve it...loved this..floria

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

"I can feel your presence
in the boulevard of my heart."

BT, it's writing like this that TRULY
truly sets you apart. Everything springs
from the heart. Well spoken Brother Poet.

Smiles,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

the Bible says, a man leaves his father to join his bride. a woman leaves her mother to join her husband. This poem made me think of this. Intriquing write.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

So extremely beautiful and passionate is this write Bhuwan!!!!

~Nikki~

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

A lovely write Bhuwan...Fletcher B

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

excellent! echoes my thoughts completely ...

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Hi Bhuwan,
Thanks for sharing
this beautiful write...

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Bhuwan this is some awesome write...

"I am leaving myself to be with you"

In spirit I think I know the feeling!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Bhuwan a transcendant beauty! this poem
inspires and uplifts the spirit!
I love your work!;-)Bravo!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Poet, this is truly a very beautiful, deep passionate write! I really enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing it. Keep The Faith.

I have never seen you
but I know you are there.
I can feel your presence
in the boulevard of my heart.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

This is deeply beautiful....ty for sharing it....

I have that picture in my hallway....just lovely....

ty, Dani

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

So intensely passionate!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Beautiful!

Jack

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

This was a lovely and haunting poem, beautiful, I loved this verse:

I am leaving myself
to be with you,
greet me with your love,
and keep me forever with you.

excellent Bhuwan,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

I have already died
more than the death
but I am not dead yet,
because of my love for you.

A feeling many in love so deep have felt. Another brilliant write, Bhuwan. Wonderful!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Bhuwan, a very reflected love poem. True love does take us outside or self and we travel to many secret places in our sould searching
for our beloved before the fact. Somehow our subconscious knows who she is but it remains unrevealed until after the fact; when we are in a relationship. But we do know somehow when she arrives on the scene; that this is the red rose of our hearts and she will be with us
always. Like 'Vesna' says, we are then TWIN FLAMES ... eternal in makeup and scope that last forever. This is such a lovely poem. Your friend Bill