In front of my eyes there are many angels,
but in my eyes, there is only one angel.
That angel is you, and only you, my love.
And my love for you, is still as sweet
as the song of the bird’s after the storm.
Alas! If the dead can come back
to the Earth and flutter in silence around
those they loved, I shall come tonight
and whisper in your ears, “O love, I’d
left my love for you on the petals
of the breeze. Open the window
of your core, and let them stroll in.”
And then, perhaps, you may hold
my love, amid the tears of joy, in the
midst of your eyes. O love! Do not
mourn my death. There is the seed
of my love in your heart. You’ve got to
let it grow. You’ve got to let it blossom
into a beautiful rose. Do not be sad,
I shall descend from the Sky every night
into your arms, and rise from your lap
every morning as the Sun, and caress
the rosette of your cheeks with joy.
And if there be a stellar sensation
in your core, it shall be me, thinking
about you, my love! And if there be
a puff of waft in your hair, it shall be
me, holding you in my arms, my love!
Ah! Rejoice, and let the tears of happiness
in your eyes, tell me that you are still mine.
You are still mine. You are still mine.
I am not afar; I am just closer to the Stars.
I shall pass by like the breeze and heal your lips.
Absolutely beautiful, my friend
An amazing write
thanks for sharing
William .....Peace
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2005
YOU ARE STILL MINE is magnificent,absolutely breathtaking. Bittersweet, romantic, sensual, stunning. Beautiful flow.
Well crafted atmosphere.
Write on, poet!
This is magnificent, certainly a masterpiece in my eyes. This evokes so many emotions, beautifully romantic, yet a sadness of being alone, but the happiness dparted beloved looking upon one. The whole poem is penned with exceptional class although these lines are so very touching:
I shall descend from the Sky every night
into your arms, and rise from your lap
every morning as the Sun, and caress
the rosette of your cheeks with joy.
And if there be a stellar sensation
in your core, it shall be me, thinking
about you, my love!
Well done once again Bhuwan :)
warm hugs
Elga
Thank you for your wonderful reviews Bhuwan.
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2005
OMG! This is glorious..damn this is good..love it..saved it..ty dear friend..your pen shines..
Aw~~~~~Ow~~~~~~
first love the picture
but you nack for giving chills are too much!!!!
very comforting write and love
as someone said below Ed i think "marvelous composition"!!!
This is good and it also puts me in mind of a poem written for cancer survivors and the ones that pass on. Called Free, another one is Death Be Not Proud.
Song of Songs in the Bible says that "Love is as strong as death and as unyielding as the grave"... this is an awesome poeticisation of the love that endures beyond death, Bhuwan, and is written with every atom of your living being, it seems to me. The sentiments and language are enduring and beautiful beyond measure. Your heart exceeds the romantic expression of anyone else I know in the language you use: so classical and yet wholly visceral and palpable. Never alone either side of the grave - what a message of the eternal nature of such a love! I especially love the lines that are so intimate and personal: "O love, I'd left my love for you on the petals of the breeze. Open the window of your core, and let them stroll in" and "I shall pass by like the breeze and heal your lips": so ethereal and yet totally intimate. You never cease to amaze me. God be with you mightily. LOL Kate xx
Bhuwan,
Written with the insight of a true poet. Romantic yes, but even more, it brings comfort to those suffering the loss of a loved one. Love never dies. Once true love is experiencd those feelings wrap themselves around our heart and remain with us forever. Absolutely true poetry at it's best today!
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
An amazing write
thanks for sharing
William .....Peace
Well crafted atmosphere.
Write on, poet!
Love from India - Joel -
This is magnificent, certainly a masterpiece in my eyes. This evokes so many emotions, beautifully romantic, yet a sadness of being alone, but the happiness dparted beloved looking upon one. The whole poem is penned with exceptional class although these lines are so very touching:
I shall descend from the Sky every night
into your arms, and rise from your lap
every morning as the Sun, and caress
the rosette of your cheeks with joy.
And if there be a stellar sensation
in your core, it shall be me, thinking
about you, my love!
Well done once again Bhuwan :)
warm hugs
Elga
Thank you for your wonderful reviews Bhuwan.
Vesna:)
first love the picture
but you nack for giving chills are too much!!!!
very comforting write and love
as someone said below Ed i think "marvelous composition"!!!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
This is just way ubove perfection!!
Love Tinka
Poetic mastery of the written, versed, imaged word - truly an exceptional piece!!
Best to you,
Robert
Written with the insight of a true poet. Romantic yes, but even more, it brings comfort to those suffering the loss of a loved one. Love never dies. Once true love is experiencd those feelings wrap themselves around our heart and remain with us forever. Absolutely true poetry at it's best today!
Sherry
gypsie