lovely poetic expression my friend. but be careful more young ladies than you think might come and take you up on it. Check this out, when we're lonely with no one, love seems like finding a diamond in the rough. As soon as we find someone real nice, every love in the world starts trying to entice us.Before i met my wife, other woman treated me like I had the plaque. Then when I met my pretty wife, women started popping out of the wood work. I found myself running in order to keep what i had found. I thought, "this makes no sense." And it's still happening. Lifes crazy. G
Bhuwan, I sense a deep sadness in you from this poem. It is as if you are struggling to understand why you can't hear the woman who you love so deeply say to you..."I love you."
I know I don't read everything you write, but whenever I have the time to read you I am never disappointed by your talent. I hope you find what you are looking for, your soul is pure.
Love,
~ Sara
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2003
You are very talented.....
Have a great rest of the day!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2003
Hey Bhuwan...this is awesome...you are one heck of a person....I love your poetry and style...floria
A truly lovely poem, Bhuwan and I'm keeping this one. The picture of you is great too.
~Chrissie
Reviewed by fare good (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2003
This is beautiful these words are so powerful God has given us the source of wisdom, only if we can apply it to save the world. Thank you for the comment.
Wow, you've covered it all, Bhuwan, and marvelously! Your picture reflects, to me, your wonderfully poetic mind and heart! You look very "soulful"... :)
Okay!!! I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU!!
Do you????
Hehehehehehehehehe..I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU...this sound nice...I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU,
I love Bhuwan You and you!!!!
That would be easy to say
'I love you'....cause you are so beautiful of mind and so wonderful at words and you make this old girl aussie smile....thank you for your wonderful poetry and for sharing your gift with us all.
from
your aussie fan
Kay.
Who knew the Wright's had a trunk full of hidden family secrets? Searching for treasure and hidden family secrets is one way to fuel the flames of passion.
Like the images you painted with your words.
Fantastic write
Nico
Tami
Reindeer
I know I don't read everything you write, but whenever I have the time to read you I am never disappointed by your talent. I hope you find what you are looking for, your soul is pure.
Love,
~ Sara
Have a great rest of the day!
~Chrissie
Vesna
~Joseph
Floreann *****
Do you????
Hehehehehehehehehe..I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU...this sound nice...I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU,
I love Bhuwan You and you!!!!
Love Tinka
'I love you'....cause you are so beautiful of mind and so wonderful at words and you make this old girl aussie smile....thank you for your wonderful poetry and for sharing your gift with us all.
from
your aussie fan
Kay.
...and wonderful pic too!... :)
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
~Alexandra~