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Goth Girl
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GOTH GIRL


Black hair, black clothes,
black eyelashes,
silver studs in the knee-length boots,
pale daughters-of-Dracula complexions

I could be in Whitby for a Goth convention,
standing on a crag
looking out on the cold North sea,
but I'm having a coffee break
from learning Swedish,
and the blonde thread running
through my thoughts
has been momentarily lost,
a shadow darkens the sun.

Sneaking a glance at her chill loveliness
no fangs or love bite from the master
blemish her ivory neck
I laugh behind my newspaper,
laugh at the adult restraint
I have to honour
laugh at the sentence,
Welcome to my castle!

She turns to look my way
but I have to get going
- Age before Beauty -
before the light of those eyes
makes me break
my thousand-year silence.




                 

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 Reviews of "Goth Girl"
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 17, 2011
Boundless imagination!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 25, 2009
Ohhhhhhhhh this is a chiller.......makes me imagine Lestat, looking at the amatures.......I do like this alot :) could be the beginning of a novel ....maybe????? pax A

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

This composition takes me on trip to imagination... "Goth Girl" strikes my learning mind.

Keep on posting Your jewels.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2005
This is great, I love it- as a goth girl at heart, if no longer in dress and makeup, I love this.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 2, 2005
I love this, Kenny. Somehow, you make me feel as though I am right there watching it all happen. The whole experience stirs something in my soul. Superbly done, my friend. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
... and before she drives a stake into your heart! Actually, I bet she's just on her way round to look after her Granny and to take the little Yorkie for a walk - no, that WOULD be Whitby! You would cut quite a dash as Goth Man... could start a new trend at Burtons; they could do with vamping up. Braw!! :))

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
a man's poem is his castle ... well penned!

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
I love where my mind takes me after the closing line. Visions of Master Vamps and all that chillingly good stuff. 3 thumbs up!

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
i loved this but then i love most of your poetry kenny

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
Excellent write Kenny love the imagery it's all black to me lol...nice one.

Paul;-]


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