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Concealed by Prideful Need
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cerebral death- noun: death when respiration and other reflexes are absent; consciousness is gone; organs can be removed for transplantation before
the heartbeat stops




CONCEALED BY PRIDEFUL NEED


To carve a smile thru wax mask
And socket punctured eyes
With holes to breathe pure air at last
Expressive frozen sigh

In textured smoothness, contoured plane
Possessive right.... of  self
Avoiding warmth by solar bane
Locked in the darkest cell

Inhaling midnight's coolest breath
By shadows blended leagues
Beneath the mask....cerebral death
Yet surface sight.....deceives....

When all is lost, yet heart remains
By legacy of deed
For deep within a madness reins
Concealed by prideful need

 



 


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 Reviews of "Concealed by Prideful Need"
Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
Wow...........

Rod Bohen

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
In a word.......Brilliant!

ty, Dani

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2004
You know why I like this - because it says the basic human in us all
can persevere past all the pain. After the chips all fall down, we will move on, one way or the other. And hopefully, its the positive way.

It truly is falling down and getting up.

T Y sweety -- now where's that pale of water. ;o)

xo Dana

Reviewed by Robert Montesino
Reviewed on April 15, 2004
Another masterpiece Lady A! Your on a roll...

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on April 15, 2004
Very powerful! An outstanding piece.
I just can't get over your nicks.
LOL Gutter Girl.
Too funny!

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on April 15, 2004
this poem reminds me of venice, a place supposedly of dark channels hidden misery. I saw the carnival masks in warm sunshine though.
Very concentrated work here, every word earning its keep
in your castle of love!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 14, 2004
G.G. you are on a higher plane with this beauty!Kudo's!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 14, 2004
superb poetic conceit!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2004
You are a masterful poet...great writing Anita...floria

Reviewed on April 14, 2004
This was so powerful, the image and feelings in this poignant poem,was outstanding,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on April 14, 2004
Wonderful write Lady A! You are a masterful poet.

Jack

Reviewed on April 14, 2004
(((lady a)))

O, my God, what a powerful, stunning vision for the eyes and senses you have penned--breathtaking in form and meaning--and i adore the artwork

*BRAVA*, dear (((friend))), your best yet

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. *a keeper this is--thank you*


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