After all, it is not where one washes one's neck that counts but where one moistens one's throat.......Djuna Barnes
MOISTNESS RELEASED
Tranquil and wet....moistness released Gradual depths...currents of peace Refreshingly cool....submerged smooth and slow Smooth second skin..caressed by the flow
Drenched by the rising, weeping drops fall Releasing the rapture....as temptation calls Ravenous fires now hiss subdued Satisfied pleasures.....revived...and renewed
Pleased and appeased by the moistest of licks Gentle and through, languid or quick By vigorous strokes......or going down on 'Tis lovely to dip.....in a cool summer pond!!!
MuuuHaaaaHaaaaaaa
A
The Source
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Reviews of "MOISTNESS RELEASED"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
by jove you're clever..this is delightful..wow!!
Vesna :)
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2004
You naughty...witty...clever little poet you...you had me going again...hmmmp!!...very well done...YOU ROCK!! Fletcher B
A page-turning novel about a relationship between best friends that is interrupted because of betrayal , deceit, sexual promiscuity and pregnancy happens!
Vesna :)
Reindeer
LP
softly sensual and o, so pleasing to read--well done!
(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)
Just another name choice
Fabulous poem and pic!
Refreshing in every sense of the word.
lol...yeah okay...rof!
Very talented word weaving my
friend. LOL...btw..that pic
is fabulous.
D a n a M a t t h e w s x
Hahahahaha..got me for a while sleezy girl mind of mine!!
Love Tinka
Peter Paton
...Michael