Borrowed Time (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 4, 2005

Anita,

Excellence in verse and meaning ... outstanding write - great photo!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Randal Files (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Wow! What truth. "Time is ours to borrow".

Reviewed on February 20, 2005

Dear Anita,

Always beautiuflly expressed, you have a way with words. Superb poetry and wonderful graphic Anita

If I may I borrow your line "wish I had written this one"

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

A timeless piece - as are the quote and that most intriguing graphic.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

I love the cadence and rhyme of this poem, Anita. You picked your words perfectly, and still the rhyme seems unforced, a testament to your talent. This is excellent! The graphic is great; too, I swiped it for future projects. <grin>
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

Awesome write and love that picture, Anita (also love the flying pig on your bio page...)...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

Awesome picture, fantastic poem...

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

This poem has the rhythm of a pendulum, in time with its verses. The clock has been wound, the seconds counted down. All the more reason to enjoy every precious thing...now.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

It is true that you can not change who you are but you can change what you are.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

Great job,,and picture is something else!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

what great rhyme and rhythm, a hard combination. beautiful wording also

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

Profound and great flow. Where did you find that astounding picture, Anita?

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

Superb write Lady A, love your rhythm and rhyme...I'd love to know when, when is;-)

etw

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

See he's gotta a head for time. Nearly there yet? don't all parents love those words..

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

Very insightful write.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

Hey! Could use that photo for the poem I just got through writing. This is good, Lady. You teased us with feathery phrases and whisps of gloom. I like it. Do it again.

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

Yes, yes. Interesting pic, too. R

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

Lady A,

A most hypnotic, passionate write--a lovely way to pass the time. :)

BRAVA!

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

very nice, anita, and the pic is too cool! i love it! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D