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RUBBER NECK
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My definition [of a philosopher] is of a man up in a balloon, with his family and friends holding the ropes which confine him to earth and trying to haul him down. Louisa May Alcott








Rubber Neck

Start my existence on the factory floor
Counted and boxed and shoved out the door
In a bag with my comrades, I'm hung on a peg
Deflated and lifeless, for air we now beg

Here we're trapped in our prison, and wait for the day
For the breath of life that takes slackness away
As we lay here so helpless, all head and a neck
And ponder the future, and sit and reflect

Will we go to a party, a park or a fair?
Will our diet be helium, water or air?
This waiting seems endless, please purchase us soon
The agony and ecstasy of a big blue balloon


Pax A

9/16/99


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 Reviews of "RUBBER NECK"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 5, 2010
AWESOME. This is the Anita I 'know'! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 4, 2010
Love it, Pax, from title to big blue balloon.
Metaphorically right! -gene.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
Fine metaphor, Pax,
and sustained from first till last.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
Unigue and wonderfully metaphorical...liked the thought process on this one.
fee

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
A tragic, but short-lived tale. Creatively presented. ;-)

But then, we could be writing about the unemployed..

Ron

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
I guess we all share something in common with that balloon.
Will we be filled with too much food, drink, hot air or ego?
I liked this write.
God bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
Oh my......sad writing but very well done..stay safe and well..Hugsss

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
metaphorically, this is sad-a thought provoking write


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