They float in the air just waiting for life
In search of a host be it brother or wife
No location to wild,nor tame or sedate
Just burrow on down, and begin the dry wait
Their patience is endless,their devotion supreme
Always there lurking, seen...yet....unseen
They're supply is abundant, there is never a lack
An invisible hand guides us down the long track
Our decisions are personal yet they know our minds
The Id basks in uniqueness, its own neon sign
Is free will an option? Do they LET us glide by?
Do they concour our hearts, or control our proud minds?
We can choose or reject, make our own destinies....
This Sevengalian hold....will not less us be free....
Admit that we have them? We all seem so pure?
Sometimes they are crutches that help us endure...
Dimensional, negative or positive.....
They teach us the moral...To Live and Let Live
We can horde them or share them, ignore or let go....
Treasure and store them, line them up in a row.....
No matter your language, a names's just a name
Illusions, deceptions, mirages and games
The phantom that plagues all of humanity?
SECRETS our SECRETS....and just meant to be!!!
SHHHHHHHHHH..............!
Anita
9/3/99
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Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2003
Now i must say, this is excellent, i love reading something that rolls off my tongue and this my dear fell off, superb usage of the right words in the right place, and thats something we all dont often do, but in this piece your writing is flawless...excellent take care...Mark xx
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Wise words. Fantastic write
S
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
You're incredible...I'm so glad I found you..I'LL BE BACK FOR MORE!!!!
this very good Anita i enjoyed it very much thank you
steve
Reviewed by Emilie Dybevik
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
..POISE :) ...ooops, fast fingers! Em!
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
YOU are EVERY good bon-bon any woman has put her lips on in times of pleasure or frustration. This link never fails me :) You know how to takes senses and make them feel. You truly bleed human emotion. Crafted with such dignity and poies ;) as always.
Thank you,
Emilie
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
Missed you Lady A~
this is awesome and thought provoking.
PJ
This is so creative. I love your head, Anita ( I'm sure I've said that before ;) )
Excellent rhyme and flow as always.
Where have you been?..missed you.
Chrissie :)
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Excellent write!!
vesna
Jack
steve
YOU are EVERY good bon-bon any woman has put her lips on in times of pleasure or frustration. This link never fails me :) You know how to takes senses and make them feel. You truly bleed human emotion. Crafted with such dignity and poies ;) as always.
Thank you,
Emilie
this is awesome and thought provoking.
PJ
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Excellent rhyme and flow as always.
Where have you been?..missed you.
Chrissie :)
Long time no see!!
Welcome back!!
Love
Tinka