Message In A Bottle (Message From A Lost Soul) (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 20, 2006

Well, Anita Pax, welcome back. I'm still coming in, I enlisted, but a month ago, thru, encouragement from a friend. I got a lot more of that, as I posted my first, poems and such. The kind words, and praise, gave me, a very prolific pen, and my heart did they touch. So that,explains, why, in my first, 30 days, I wrote, so damn, much.

So now I've met another character, as, we all, surely are. This one, as so many others, seems: a bright, shining, star.-- Art.
Great stuff. I just read three or four. You're a talented lady. Thank you for your review, and I hope you enjoy more of my writes.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 5, 2006

This is of stunning beauty!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 27, 2006

Anita,
You have much soul in a woman of wisdom and wit. You surely must be a character who people admire and love. I find your verses irresistable myself and am urged to search for more. Thank you Anita...I will enjoy more of your poems tonight.
Susan

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 18, 2006

An unusual form and narrative slant for you, my Dear, but you still pull the reader in and wrap your poetic fingers round them in your enticing and compelling way. Whether you write with humour or passion, COMpassion is always tightly interwoven into your work, revealing your tender heart and soulful, realist nature. This is a poignant portrait which touches the mind and heart in equal measure. Bless you - and thank you for your Easter Skippity messages... hope you is still hopping after all the chocolate!! :)) PS - LOVE all the humour you send my way, too!! Deeply appreciated from within my, at times, ghoulish catacombs. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on April 18, 2006

Message in a bottle - that is something that always fascinated me. Thinking about the person who might have sent it, about his fate.
You created a great poem. Brava !
Amira

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

This narrative poem makes for a good read. Well done, Anita. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 6, 2003

Loved the haunting imagery in this write, and the message. Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

Thoughts in a bottle. While the bottle remains adrift its contents are abstract,just so much flotsam in a vast sea. Then the message is recieved as its spoken and it becomes something concrete... Oh, to hell with it. I enjoyed this poem a lot.

Adam

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

The story line is just FLAMING BLOODY GOOD! This is a really good soul cry. I absolutely love this. AND DO I HAVE SOME PICTURES FOR YOU .....seeing this reminded me of how I sat on those rocks in Norway and wrote my tail off. This was a fine piece to feast my eyes on!

Thank you,
Teresa-Em

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

Poetic perfection!!!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

Excellance Lady A!!!!
A lost soul with such a powerful message, I have found mine and in it a greater wisdom!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

This is a fantastic, moody poetic tale and you told it very, very well! Marvellous write!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

I could feel the emotions deeply while reading this, and I could feel the sea and the salt in the air. Great write and picture.

Reviewed by Alain Gracio

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

a wonderful tribute to all those who have perished looking for their soul.
In the ocean of life one is subject to unrepentent waves of unknown origin. With the occasional dolphin to guide us and give us a lift
cheers
Alain

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

Exquisite poetry !

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

This is very soulful poetry.
LM

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

Hey there Lady A! about time you put in an appearance;-)! have missed you! This is so outstanding now what can you possibly do for an encore?;-) I know, you have many more up your sleeve!Bravo!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

WOW!! I have to say that this to me, is one of the best poems I have ever read! If you dont mind I am going save this. Wonderful write Lady A!!

Jack

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

excellent write, anita! enjoyed this so much, and the pic is absolutely spellbinding! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

This was wonderful, beautifully written, I loved this!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

Mosr wonderfully written Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

OoooooooooooooooooooH! Very original easy-flowing, a classic theme in modern language!
Inspiring!
It is a good day at the Den, Anita. This is the first day I see so many great works, noticed?
Thank you for sharing!
Nevine Al seidi

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

Very good tale spun here. Well penned! ~SH~

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

This old salt loved this writing of sentiment. Wonderfully written.
Kudos!

tony:)