Atlantis (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Clever Poem, Anita!!! I have always been enjoyed the mysteries of legends. Especially, those written about Atlantis.

Hugs,

Victoria

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Smoothly written, nice story and rhyme.

George J Carroll

Reviewed by J. Pajot

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Wonderfully done!!!I bow to your energitic spirit, dear lady. And, by the way, I believe in magic, too. Bright blessings to you and yours, Jim.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Captivating read Anita,you're right, not even the shadow knows;-)!Wonderful work. Hope your're doing better!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Enchanting write, a pleasure to read.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Enjoyed reading this poem very much Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Excellent tale in poetry.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Excellent Alanis has always facinated me.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Anita...captivating write...you have written a very interesting piece here...thank u.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

Hi Lady A
Your mother left you a marvelous gift in the stories that left
you stores to express this archetypical mystery woven into the tapestry of so many of our ancestors--but largely unknown. Your second stanza captured my attention. While as yet, I most believe the Truth of Atlantis to be a composite--the suppositions of the second stanza speak to possibilities perhaps manifest in a modern
archetectual mystery called the Coral Castle. A single man mastermind and manifest the entire huge estate--he will say only that the source of his accomplishment is hidden in his private dicovery of how the great pyramids were built. Vicky

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

ha ha ha,I love the little footnote 'bout reincarnation ,my mum believes in that too,yeh,I think I do as well,still pondering on that one though...great idea for a poem,this poem was really interesting and held my attention...great work!!!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

..wondrous piece..hmm..by the way..:)..your mother is quite correct..think about it!!!

Excellent write...give us a sequel..eg."Far Memory"

oh, go on, you can DO it!!
I'm looking forward to it!
warm wishes,

vesna

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

Hi Anita,

Great poem, love the rhyme and the flow. I have always loved speculating about the unknown. I guess that is because I can envision it anyway I want.

~ Sara

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

Oh I loved this, beautiful and excellently written!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

This really held me Anita..so interesting.Very well written, as always.
~Chrissie :)

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

The flow of this poem really brought Atlantis alive for me. I also saw the Disney movie and thought it rocked. And so do you.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

Such a fantastic write..

Enjoyed this very much!!

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

You never know. One of the legends I always found fasintating is that the few who escaped ended up in Egypt. Wonderful write!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

Lady A this was so very interesting...got me to thinking there at the end..and I love the footnote about your mother...great write..floria

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

Enjoyed this poem very much, and I really liked the part about your mother and reincarnation!