Tears upon your cheek (poem) by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 17, 2014

I have experienced this of course and that is why I feel "intimately knowing" about what you express. I have to ask (myself), "After all of that, what is left when one changes one's mind and "moves on?" You have given me much to think about, Carol. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

xo Regis

Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)

Reviewed on September 13, 2012

Separation from one you love is painful. This is spiritual in nature, wonderful write.

Di

Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2012

All I can do is sigh and feel pain for someone loved so greatly and far away from you. Beautiful Lily, I hope when you open your eyes he's there.

Mark

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2012

Carol, I believe all of us have felt
separation in this way!!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2012

I know this feeling, I know how it feels not to be with the one you love. It's like you write to my own heart.

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2012

The pain must be terrible when two connected souls are separated.
It leaves an emptiness and a feeling of being incomplete.
How tenderly you put ointment on the deep pain with the last verse

For naught you've gone
I know you're here
Although out of my sight
Our essence blend together
Both one white shining light

Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2012

My dear child, you speak with a heart that is constantly full of love. Your poetry is easy to read and well understood. Thank you for sharing your beautiful intimacies

Edith

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com

Reviewed on June 17, 2012

Whether object oriented or state of mind oriented, the "in love" essence knows only its own elements that make up the appreciation.

Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2012

You speak of beauty and knowing what love is dear Lily, your words speak directly from your heart. Your talent is beauty in itself.

I bow and tip my hat to you

Cyrano

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on June 16, 2012

An exquisite reflection of soul mated love.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 16, 2012

No couple could ask for more than shared oneness you've expressed.

Ron

Reviewed by Clarence Prince

Reviewed on June 16, 2012

Precious words of real love and of high-regard are truly in this poem! Well done, The Lily!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 15, 2012

So deeply moving and heartfelt. I can so relate to these soul mate verses. I too long for my soul mate, he is out there but not within my reach. amazingly beautiful poem, Lily...

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on June 15, 2012

Lily,
Being a part of each other makes the parting so destructive, like the ripping out of a part of your heart would be. Your words are so sensitivly written that the reader can feel the meaning from inside.
Budd

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on June 15, 2012

"Remember places that we walked" That says so much - beautiful!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on June 15, 2012

Taking the moment as the moment is supposed to be taken . . . and shared. Parting is such sweet sorrow, as the saying goes, but the parting will only turns to joy upon the reunion which is sure to come.

Enjoyed the loving manner in which this poem was projected.