Their eyes met in the dim light
spirited away in conversation
scent of the sandalwood candle burning
both smile through its flickering light
She watches as his lips move
and her mind wanders to the sound of rain
tink… plunk… pitter patter… plunk plunk
it’s rhythm becoming stronger and faster
In the distance, through the rain-streaked window,
a single street lamp dimly shines through the rain
someone opens the door and a rush of cold air
sends chills down their body with a whoosh
The smell of the fresh rain fills the room
surrounding tables are now empty
waiters cleaning floors and tabletops briskly
glancing ever so often at the two who remain
She closes her eyes smelling the rain
the sound rhythmically singing to her soul
she opens her eyes and sees the curtain billow
a flash of lightening lights up the room
Settling deep into the warmth of her bed
she turns to watch his chest rise and fall
as she pulls the sheet up over his lengthy body
she brushes a wisp of hair from his forehead…
Carolee Dennis-Woosley
April 18, 2013
Regis
Mark
Gail
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
against a window pane..
while love sleeps
tender
Thank You Carolee for being
so romantic with your poetry
Lady Vivian
Rain's heartbeat and flickers of candle light. A romantic and passionate poem. Beautiful.
Lady Mary Ann
Ron
Cheers,
Dan
Not all as it ends up with a tender romantic moment when she, very caring, pulls up the sheets and brushes a wisp of hair from his forehead.
Beautiful and romantic Carol
Love ya!
Jane
Love,
Deborah
Let it rain...........the rhythmic flow
of you poetic words, Lily...in harmonious
heart beat...are piercing my skin...touching
my soul...penetrating my mind...it defines
my deepest dream.....
Thank you for a sweet experience.
budd