Desire within (poem) by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2013

I hear ya!

Am saving this one..
thank you so much Lily!

Blessings,

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Gail R (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2013

How many maidens have loved from afar the unreachable. Great vision and story here.

Gail

Reviewed by Gail D (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2013

Its very hard to love someone that is untouchable, great poem about this frustration when loving someone.

Gail

Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2013

That must be hard to love someone from a distance, great one again Lily.

Mark

Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2013

To admire and love from afar is both beautiful and painful. Excellent visuals Carolee I hope she obtains this love.

Di

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2013

I have no doubt that most of us have had feelings for someone without them knowing, I know I do!

Love,

Deborah

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2013

A wonderful expression of forbidden love,
a burning existence in the mind of the person(s) concerned.
How many hearts have burned with a secret desire this way

You've expressed it so very well Carol, so beautiful again

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on May 15, 2013

Feeling
hopes and fears of
secrets
not to be beholden

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on May 15, 2013

~Lily~
Beauty in verses of mystic and dreams of forbidden love.
Accolades to you.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 15, 2013

Unrequited love, it's so enticing and ever so dangerous...
I do a lot of Shakespeare plays, I feel as though this could be one of those stories in the making..
Great work as always!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 15, 2013

History in the making! I wonder how many times this has played out. The simple chemistry of opposites attracting, women wanting power and security to feather their nest, and men liking youth and vulnerability.

You had me on the edge of my seat, wondering what she would do next to get his attention.

Ron

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on May 15, 2013

A most delicate expression of love, the words,the senses, the allure behind hidden of veils, hugs.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on May 14, 2013

Ah, to gaze upon the one you love and not be able to "make a move". My heart breaks for her!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 14, 2013

I was here & read I did, dear...you know how I felt, but now I need a belt...e

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 14, 2013

Thank you for sharing this engaging account of love, Lily. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on May 14, 2013

This story needs to continue...there's a wee bit more to share, of that I'm sure.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on May 14, 2013

Admire from a close distance hiding what one feels. I think many do this. Wondeful write.

Stay well and keep writing
Eddy

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 14, 2013

Out of a book of love that you have created.

G

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on May 14, 2013

this is such a well written statement of love not to be where both feel only the pain of wanting to be what can not and you found the perfect visual to accompany it
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on May 14, 2013

Ahhh . . . This so reminds me of the British television drama series "Upstairs, Downstairs." Although I seem to remember there was some physical contact between the highbrow and the servants. This was done especially well, Carol.