SO TRUE; '...PURE HAPPINESS CAN'T LAST, FADING SURELY INTO THE PAST...'. AH, BUT JOY....A GIFT FROM ETERNAL SHORE'S GRASS... WILL NEVER CEASE TO SPEW FORTH ITS MIRACULOUS MASS. A FINE TOKEN, SAVED, INDEED. THANK YOU JOHN. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
Wow, reading this felt like going down a slide for me. Zipped right along, exciting, good short lines and word choice, even the last two lines = ride over. Good part is when we can get back in line for another go at it. Very visual was “Adrift on a still pond/Snug in a palm frond” — had to love that! ~~ djl
Fading surely into the past
I so love the way you ended it, what can I say
I always loved happy endings John :)