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An Eye Opener

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Wednesday, June 23, 2004

Five little babies

Opened their ten little eyes.

I gazed in wonder

Such a wondrous surprise.

If only mankind

Had the innocence of these kits,

Can you even imagine

This world and its bliss?

I truly hope these kittens

Have very good lives,

In their lovely new homes,

Or I�ll need a lovely new wife!

Spent the day gazing in awe

At these five newborns

As they opened their eyes to the world

For the very first time.

Momma Patty is doing fine, too.

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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on April 14, 2005

Ed,

Your compassion truly shines in this beautifully composed poetic write ... lovely!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 24, 2004

Well written Ed!!

Tinka

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on June 24, 2004

Ah... Ed... the mere fact that their first sight was of you guarantees a smooth ride, for they saw deep, lasting love looking back at them. You are the hope of the future. katy xox.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on June 24, 2004

I'd take all five and add to those I already have, but that would leave me to finding a new hubby - lol. Since I already have 20 big eyes. I sure hope they find a good home.

Purrfect write.

Hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

I smiled the minute I saw these sweet babies!!! I just love kitties, and these are adorable!! This is a lovely poem, I am still smiling after reading it:)

Reviewed by Claywoman (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

Gee, I'd take at least two of them, but I live so far away from Chicago...sniff....they are gorgeous...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

This was so sweet and lovely, the little kitties are so cute!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

Ed...I need a kitty to keep Garfi company...do you fedex...great loving poem...Fletcher B

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

Oh Ed! I want one;-)How adorable! You are a great dad and your wife a wonderful mom!;-)Thanks for sharing this with us!All the best to the newest members of the family and to their mom Patty!

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

If they really new what was head ,, I ownder would they close their eyes and just slip back into their mother.
Nice write and cute kittens there
Tommy

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

Excellent piece Ed, our lady had six this week, but only four remain...
Allen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

Geez, another cat lover...LOL! Hope you find homes for them, keep them in your area we seem to have enough feral cats around here but rufuz keeps them at bay and up in trees...LOL! Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

It is fasinating watching the young as they grow, their first experience, the first sighting of a butterfly, the first kill, yum :-)
Loved your write.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

I loved it Smoochy Man!!! Picture very was cute too!!! So sorry Ed, I am allergic to cats� small ones or the eight foot tall ones!!!

Truly hope these kittens
Have very good lives,
In their lovely new homes,
Or I�ll need a lovely new wife!

HAHAHAHAHA�Ed, It�s more better to able looking out the window� then rather looking in�huh???!!!!� Happy wife = Happy Life!!!

Thanks for sharing it, Poet!!!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

Makes me want to rub my cheek against those cute little
pugnoses!!!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

(((ed)))

if i were a cat, i'd purr contentedly

aw, what the hell :) *purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*

four paws up, ten claws up (unless they're polydactyl, then it's more) LOL--ADORABLE!

give mama patti and all five kitties a pat and a purr from me

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

This poem is so lovable...it purrs!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

But what if they were eight foot bigger

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

Thank you for sharing, next best thing to being there!

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