“And think not you can
Direct the course of love,
For love,
If it finds you worthy,
Directs your course.”
~ Kahlil Gibran ~
When life has got me down
And I need to ease my pain
I eagerly rush off to see her
In bright sunshine or dark rain
There is no one quite like her
She holds my enraptured soul
I find her extremely captivating
She’s so vivacious and so bold
She caresses me with her smile
She knows me like an old book
She leads me most seductively
To her alluring babbling brook
Her lair is delicately scented
With her fragrant eau de cologne
As I inhale its vapor so joyously
Very soon my will is not my own
She soon offers me a refreshing sip
Of her intoxicating elixir oh so fine
She lovingly concocts it here herself
And it quenches me like fine wine
She beseeches me to linger
As she cools my weary feet
And soon her winged minstrels
Lovingly serenade me oh so sweet
She instructs her many servants
To now fan my world weary brow
Then she coos and she captivates
As she entraps my heart somehow
Soon she whispers in my ear
I truly want you here with Me
We could live a life so grand
So wild so uninhibited and so free
As I gaze upon her lovely beauty
In all her splendid naked glory
I admit that I’m always tempted
To submit to her enticing love story
It truly sounds so wondrously tantalizing
Her generous offer of such a carefree life
But my nagging sense of duty always returns
And I slowly head home to deal with life’s strife
But as I sadly leave her lovely Paradise
I once again whisper my sincerest regrets
Maid Nature is truly an alluring Enchantress
And many of my desires she always whets
When life has got me down
And I need to ease my pain
I eagerly rush off to see her
In bright sunshine or dark rain
©2004, Ed Kostro
I just melted into this one. Your wording is just right, a bit of mystery, which you're good at. I also see that the door to remaining with her is slightly ajar... you'll be back... someday forever. I know this is true.
Beautifully written... you were, indeed, inspired. katy xox
Exquisite !! such beautiful vivid imagery, thank you for allowing me into this brief moment of tranquil serenity.
warm hugs
Elga
Then home to your real enchantress. No not the dogs. Rebecca you ole cheesecake!
Like minds today buddy boy.
Thought you had abandon Mother Nature
Well Penned.
William ......Peace
God bless,
Sandie.
You have created another splended poem here.
Really Good!
Peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
Beautifully penned tribute to the Mother. :) BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Glorious write Ed!!
Love Tinka
Love,
Tiger Lily
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Peace and love, Carole