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Fading with dawn's light
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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Not my usual subject matter, but this is where my muse took me.


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 I lay in his arms, dreading our last kiss
There will be no more nights beyond this
Our time together has run its course
His weak heart fails and leaves me in remorse

All these years and yet they are still not enough
I shall try to be brave, I’ll try to be tough
But the pain is too intense for me to bear
Knowing this is the last time I’ll hold him near

Fingers entwined, our hearts beating in tune
How can the end of us have come so soon?
We watch darkness fade with each painful sigh
Why do we have to be saying our last goodbye?

The rain outside falls steady, mimicking my tears
We whisper of our time and deep love thru the years
Holding on so tight, but life flees with each breath
There’s no consolation, no relief when there is death

Soon moonlight shall fade with dawns light
I can no longer hide my pain in shadows of night
As day begins to come to life, darkness is dying
That’s when the sun will catch me crying
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 Reviews of "Fading with dawn's light"
Reviewed on March 11, 2009
Denise,
Your Muse Is Embracing The Tender Mercies of Loves Depth, the poem is very touching & raises our senses to know the blessing we have before us are on borrowed time...
Peace, Love & Poetry
Vickie

Reviewed on March 10, 2009
Only the eyes close dear Denise, then look inside and there he is, with you as long as you love him, nothings changed, only the eyes close. Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2009
Very well written sweet lady,I have sure missed you and your wonderful writing..hope every thing is well with you...stay safe and well...Hugsssss

Reviewed on March 10, 2009
So much sadness and heartbreak beautifully written. I started crying about half way through.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 10, 2009
Very beautifully done Dee with such deep emotion and longing for what could have been. Love especially the ending.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on March 10, 2009
This is so amazing Denise, I loved the energy of this poem. Truly felt within my soul.
Stunning photo also.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on March 10, 2009
Ooooh, hauntingly beautiful and sad. Liz


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