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Moment of Truth
by Ruan Mills → (All Poetry by Ruan Mills)
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When you have to feel the fear and do it anyway


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Huddled in the pouring rain 
Her trunk and suitcase lay in wait 
A new beginning's on that train 
The time has come to meet her fate 

Thoughts that crowd her newfound muse 
Whilst puddles seep into her shoes 

Stomach tight in trepidation 
Fluttering of fear abound 
Nerve ends tingle consternation 
Wondering if her choice is sound 

Pat, pat, pat on canvas shield 
The damp of doubt at once revealed 

Restless now on platform slick 
Her mind engaged in diffidence 
She must devise a mental trick 
To buoy her sagging confidence 

Heartbeat pounding like a drum 
Uncertainty to overcome 

Rumble on the rail defines 
Her nemesis approaching fast 
Static arcing from the lines 
From action now, her future's cast 

Decisively steps from the rain 
Into the belly of the train. 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Moment of Truth"
Reviewed by Asa Seeley
Reviewed on March 19, 2012
...just do it! thanks for sharing.

asa

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 29, 2012
The anticipation in this little poem reaches the point of no return. Like the mysterious woman's decision to leave. We do not know where she is going. Perhaps the big city to get lost in it. But we do know that she feels great trepidation in going.

Intriguing and very rewarding to read.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 29, 2012
When you have to feel the fear, and do it anyway

A powerfully effective poetic piece, Ruan.



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