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Love Knots
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Anticipation – stomach knotted

Heartbeat with its dashes dotted

Pulse-rate sets cold hands aquiver

Hopes and dreams do not deliver

Soul from its internal scuffle

When cool and calm can’t help but ruffle

At the merest glimpse of hidden ardour

Thoughts that form their own armada

Bated breath and expectation

Love’s first taste of collaboration

All these things I long to feel

A reminder that such love is real

 


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 Reviews of "Love Knots"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on August 7, 2013
Another amazing poem. I especially liked this line: Heartbeat with its dashes dotted... yummy! M.TRue

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 31, 2013
You appear to be describing hormones in high gear. While they are great for attracting the opposite sex and creating babies, love takes longer and should endure after all these wild hormones are gone.

Ron

Reviewed on May 30, 2013
Beautiful hearts at peace when they are together. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 30, 2013
it is real, we have to but find it, so we write of what we know is there somewhere to be experienced rather than just wrote
budd

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on May 30, 2013
Beautifully rendered aspiration of love's rewards...and frustrations.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 30, 2013
. . . and you will feel them, Ruan, my friend, I have no doubts . . . Although it seems you have them . . . You know how this works . . . Turn a corner and there he is . . . Eyes meet . . . Stomach flutters . . . The beginning . . .


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