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Life's Carousel
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A Metaphor


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 Somewhere along the line

she seems to have slipped

...from her carousel of life

And inadvertently stepped

...onto somebody else’s.

 

Now that she has fallen from there,

and carousels whirl all about her

she can no longer identify her own,

...in order to climb back on.

 


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 Reviews of "Life's Carousel"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on February 21, 2014
Your literary characters seem so full of grit and compassion and yet you tease us with this fragile reflection. M.True

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on February 20, 2014
And so goes the dilemma of many who seek identity, reach for it, grasp it, and inevitably let it go, thinking they've changed, when in fact, identity, like the cells of our body, go through the process of complete change and or replacement often. It's just the nature of our wiring. Fortunately for some of us, such discovery and acceptance allows self-identity to exist for its own sake and continue its ongoing process, finding way stations along the way for temporary respite and pondering, i.e., your carousel.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 18, 2014
Is that "she" you? If not, like a carousel, the world goes round and round and where it stops is almost never until we do. Gets one thinking.

Ron

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on February 18, 2014
Ruan,

Many of us lose our identity and try to find our way back. Excellent poetry.

Love and blessings,
Linda

Reviewed on February 18, 2014
I pray she finds her way to stand back up on her feet. Know that God is good and watching over her.

Sandie :o)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 18, 2014
Take what life gives you.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 18, 2014
i pray she finds the way to be on her own carousel soon
budd

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 18, 2014
I hope Climbing begins soon.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 18, 2014
Yep. I understand this, Ruan. It's a Catch 22.


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