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Consequences
by Ruan Mills → (All Poetry by Ruan Mills)
Saturday, November 26, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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just an observation


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Child grows up without a home

Family, torn far apart

Life unbalanced, soul adrift

Handicapped right from the start

 

Goes out into a big wide world

Seeks all that failed be repaired

Has not been taught what’s fair and just

Can only guess from what’s declared

 

Encounters harsh distorted love

Commits to cold and callous charm

Fails to see the shadows cast

By those who aim to cause them harm

 

Muted misery then ensues

They know that something’s very wrong

But past reflection is no guide

The examples there do not belong

 

No sense of ‘kin’ to raise support

No base from which to launch anew

No place to rest and start afresh

The options here are faint and few

 

Lost, alone, they test each path

Blindly reaching out to heal

The battered soul is burned again

Repeatedly the cycles reel

 

Until at last they barricade

Behind a firmly bolted door

An introspect may now emerge

Where no-mans-land can reassure

 

Looking back, from calmer seas

At logic written in the sands

‘’One cannot build a sturdy boat

With broken tools and faulty plans’’.


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 Reviews of "Consequences"
Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on November 27, 2022
Beautiful.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 26, 2022
Your poetry is so unique and distinctive, that I can recognize it even if your name is not attached. In this particular poignant piece, your perfect rhyming and storytelling approach leads to that final line that is what it is, so true. And so worth reading over and over

It's really tough to have a bad start in life that can even become generational.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 26, 2022
This is a top-shelf rendering of life's issues and challenges, with insight to its possibilities, revealed in words and style that bespeak wisdom. Another gift, another gem.


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