Mr. Taker, He's Always Taking (poem) by Handsum Hart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

so beautiful and romantic Ron, lovely and passionate poetry!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

A very romantic write, Ron! Mr. Taker is so nice! Wow!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

A unique point of view Monsieur Romantique. Thank you, Ron. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

Where can I find my "Mr. Taker"? Talking about the nice guy, of course.
Good one.
Amira

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

give and take, an ancient tango...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 17, 2005

he probably gives a lot more than he takes ...

very creative poetry!

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Ron, I do believe that many of us would truly love to have a "Mr Taker" I know I would ;-] more often than not they are "Mr Giver" (gives her the frown, the tears) Your poetry is always such a delight to read, and filled with wonderful messages, another gorgeous write Ron.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

This is such a sinfully delicious poem, Handsum. ;)

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Ah yes, Mr. Taker has taken my breath away and has sent my thoughts soaring. lol!

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

I agree and I wanted to say more about your last poem but every now and again my other personality takes over and bumps the mouse against the keyboard and that is why you get a strange review. But this is really true to your style.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Well you certainly took me in with this one Handsum!You never disappoint!;-) Another clever, creative, poem, well done!

etw

Reviewed by Debra Barone

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Excellent write....I wonder, will the taker ever give?

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Send me one like this speedmail PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE!!

Love Tink`Tinka

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Ronald this is some write. Powerfully etched with truth and insight. But I do want that pic in case I'm ever taken again in a GOOD way. LOL ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Great play with words :-)

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Great write with a creative spin...enjoyed...

EDL

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Wonderful romantic poem penned with the delicacy of a rose petal.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Handsum,

"Mr. Taker" is letter 'A' perfect!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Take a Bow, Mr. Taker, for this one!

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Wow ;) This is great, Ron!
"He takes the energy
Produced between his thighs
And heats her body up all over"
How erotic and sensuous is that?! ;)

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

OMG Ron this is such a beautiful poem of romance. I only wish my husband will things like this to me, when I get married. Thnx for sharing. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."