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Quinta Stars Of Beauty
by Mystic Rose → (All Poetry by Mystic Rose)
Monday, September 3, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A fantasy poem about my longing to live within God's eternal stars .


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Within the great chasm of a liquid Universe
are secrets that we dare not bleak away
for they were given to us with a sweet exult
to cause us to ponder pen to hand to verse
about our dear Creator's mind and sway;

He gave us heaven, opulence & grace
that we may eye its beauty and truly see
the sweet adorn of stars that light our face
in ways that we cannot imagine nor decree
the beauty of his knitted word, encased..

This frail impetus body seeks His light
for in His deep celestial sphere I find felicity
and live in mockery, of earth and all its might;
Quinta stars of beauty are here for all eternity
showing me great truth beyond compare

Silken thoughts of love weave inside my head
causing me to smile and take my time
With vicarious nudge and confidence He leads
me like a daughter into nature's own incline
I lose myself inside, "His Kingdom Lair".
 

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 Reviews of "Quinta Stars Of Beauty"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 4, 2018
I am humbly grateful to have been allowed to come to life on this planet. I am ashamed to be a human being and often, I hope I am actually an alien.

He gave us heaven, opulence & grace
that we may eye its beauty and truly see
the sweet adorn of stars that light our face
in ways that we cannot imagine nor decree
the beauty of his knitted word, encased..

And what have men done with all of this gift and grace?

Your poem is sinking in my soul where it belongs because I completely concur.

Love and best wishes to you, Mystic Rose.

Régis (Conceived in Brittany, France. A Celtic entity. :)

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 4, 2018
AMEN AND AMEN! NOW YOU'VE TAKEN ME THERE, MYSTIC! AND I THINK OF A SOFT MELODIOUS HYMN THAT GOES LIKE THIS; 'TURN YOUR EYES UPON JESUS! LOOK FULL ON HIS WONDERFUL FACE! AND THE CARES OF THE WORLD WILL GROW STRANGELY DIM...IN THE LIGHT OF 'HIS' GLORY AND GRACE'. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER, MY FRIEND. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 4, 2018
Keen imagery. Unique wordage. A palpable emotion infuses these thoughts. Enjoyed. r

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 3, 2018
A lyrical beauty this one, that builds until that final beautiful stanza. Well done.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 3, 2018
THE WORDS of this fantastic creation grabbed me and did not let go until I had read it three times. In my opinion, it is a true creation of YOUR God. Excellent wordplay, excellent I say.

Reviewed on September 3, 2018
It is hard to live a life that is without any faith. God is there to comfort us whenever we need comforting.

I often thought of people who do not have any beliefs or faith just what thier lives are like. What are they striving for in life and what are their purposes in striving? Do they just strive to impress others? What are their goals in life?

To believe in God and heaven you set a goal to yourself to be good and to live well, to be kind to others. You know the destination of your journey within your heart. This sets you at ease with yourself, and you are confident with yourself which would bring you to a much higher level than the non-believers who may go through tneir livès in no fixed directions and goals. Having goals and setting your goals in life, knowing that God is behind you 100% makes your more confident in everything you do.

The above is just my opinion. Thank you for a thought-provoking poem!

Sandie




Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on September 3, 2018
The perfect tribute to God and his celestial beings. All you need to do is look at the stars to feel the grace.


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