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Moving Through Water
by Mystic Rose → (All Poetry by Mystic Rose)
Wednesday, November 5, 2025    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A poem about grief


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You were water before I met you, immortal as the embryonic fluids of your mother's womb
then He poured fire into your soul and you became a walking flame and salt of the earth

You were but I child knowing only childish games then you grew up and now you are wise
when I spoke to you last, you told me your little heart could not stand it anymore

You looked up to heaven and asked God to come take you away, and he did for He knew,
He had made a big mistake when He parted with an Angel such as you....

You were a star in my eye and a flower in my soul, but then one day you left as quickly
as you came, you were once water, today you are the air I breathe as I remember you...

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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 22, 2025
ONLY A MOTHER KNOWS, INDEED...ONLY A MOTHER'S LOVE CAN SPEAK AS IF...IT HAPPENED, EVEN YESTERDAY. WELL DONE, MYSTIC. THANK YOU. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on November 12, 2025
So painful, so painful to read, indeed, he didn’t depart, he’s dwelling in your heart.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 8, 2025
As I read I felt the pang of your loss. I sense someone born with a birth defect that didn't allow them a long life.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on November 6, 2025
How utterly beautifully written…it moved me to tears…
I share this grief as I have experienced a loss in this way also…I write of it in my poem ‘Kiara’…

Sending much love…❤️

Diana…🌿🌺🌿


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