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Universally Yours
by Mystic Rose → (All Poetry by Mystic Rose)
Wednesday, February 20, 2019    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A poem about out space and the Universe


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Universally yours she never bequeaths an empty womb
because she is space, containing the sparkle of all eternity
She is a matchstick sulphuric light that never extinguishes
but churns into the deep without dupe, full of blue

cherry bomb thoughts arrive at the base of my skull to rev
the fantasy of a magical combustion made by great intent
She's a star shine chit made for wishing, only jarred
by the purple hues of my dreams, she's quite a sight

universally ours she caresses our eyes with an explosion
of atoms and molecules alike. An element of chemistry
she's a wash bath of cool, like the sighs of an evening high
planetary surprises await while we barely open the gate

so transfixed are we by mundanity that we never deem
the mystery of her capacious heart. Only God is privy to
her masterpiece from on high. She is not a sophomore
but rather an antiquity that fascinates me to no end .

Feb. 20 2019

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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on February 24, 2019
INDEED, WHEN WE CONSIDER THE VASTNESS OF HIS UNIVERSE... 'HIS SPACE'...THE SECRETS AND WONDERS OF IT, WHICH WE WILL NEVER EVEN BEGIN TO COMPLETELY COMPREHEND ON THIS REALM, WE ARE LIFTED INTO A PLACE OF TANTALIZING SPLENDOR, WHERE THE SENSES FAIL TO FULLY APPRECIATE, YET ...REACHES...TOUCHING AND ABSORBING ALL IT CAN. AND THE RESULTS IS A WORSHIPFUL ODE TO THE MAJESTIC, UNSURPASSED CREATIVITY AND EXISTENCE OF OUR SO WORTHY GOD! MARVELOUS RENDERED, MYSTIC AND SO ENJOYED! THANKS FOR THIS KEEPER. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 23, 2019
Esthetic coloring and imagery in this. Referring to the universe as a 'she' is intriguing. Enjoyed your thoughts. Peace... rlc

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 22, 2019
Some pretty colorful phrases with words like "cherry bomb thoughts." You are right about so many of us focused on the mundane. Whenever I'm in a place where I can see the Milky Way clearly all of the stars, the moon and the planets, it fills me with an empty awe for how little I am in the grand scheme of things.

Ron

Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on February 20, 2019
I love your ode to the ancient and mysterious universe.

Reviewed on February 20, 2019
Great poem! Your poetry always fascinates me! I love the way you weave around your words.

Sandie

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 20, 2019
This is an excellent and original tribute to all we know, and a lot more of what we don't. Knowing is only sensing and feeling, not understanding. We have a lot to learn. But you have set a very nice stage for it.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on February 20, 2019
It is the final frontier, and who knows what mysteries await us out ther.? To boldly go where no one has gone before.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 20, 2019
and fascinating she is
budd


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