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Until The Very End
by Mystic Rose → (All Poetry by Mystic Rose)
Friday, January 31, 2020    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A sonnet of love


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Here we are at the end of our marriage
remembering the tender words of love
that we uttered in our horse and carriage
tucked together like the wings on a dove
as the world stands far remote we keep bay
inside this velvet room of flower and sage
counting the blessings of a morning ray
sandwiched like two birds in a guilded cage
folded inside the sheets of time we thrive
accordianed like two insturments of old
humming the songs that once made us live
encloaked the dark, we never grew cold
true love is the diamond of old lovers and friends,
I believe that I will love you, until the very end.

Written by: Mystic Rose

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 Reviews of "Until The Very End"
Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on February 6, 2020
To love to the very end is a gift.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on February 5, 2020
HOW BEAUTIFUL, MYSTIC! THIS REMINDS OF LINES FROM THAT OLD SONG THAT DINAH WASHINGTON SANG, 'I WISH YOU LOVE'. IT GOES LIKE THIS...'MY ACHING HEART AND I AGREE THAT YOU AND I CAN NEVER BE, BUT WITH MY BEST, MY VERY BEST...I SET YOU FREE. I WISH YOU SHELTER FROM THE STORM, A COZY FIRE TO KEEP YOU WARM, BUT MORE THAN THIS...I WISH YOU LOVE!' THANKS FOR THE SHARE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on February 2, 2020
I agree with Michael. I hope this expresses the beginning of a love that will last until the very end. If so, it's expressed in a magnificent manner.

Amen!

Peace, love and blessings,

John Michael

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 2, 2020
Such a beautiful poem with all the sentiment a long life together can bring. Good marriages never end, they fade away but live on and one.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 1, 2020
A very beautiful and telling story of two people who are so well matched that they wish to spend their entire eternity together. It is the attraction that is in all of us to procreate and then nurture the children. All the while, growing together in an even deeper bond than the attraction that initially brought the two together. This kind of relationship is found throughout nature. We are just the most intelligent so we can write about the experience. Others, like whales, may pass the experience through verbal history.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on January 31, 2020
A lovely tribute to love and marriage, although I didn't understand the first line. It sounded like maybe a divorce is in the works, or someone is leaving. But that's just my opinion.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 31, 2020
Lovely poetic/prose with efficacious imagery. We live on a blue planet that circles around a ball of fire next to a moon that moves the sea. Believing is always better than pretending. Hope you are well. Peace... r


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