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Veiled
by Mystic Rose → (All Poetry by Mystic Rose)
Sunday, March 31, 2024    Rated "G" by the Author.
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a poem about how a young girl survives


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Quote by: Michael Bassey Johnson
“Beyond the veil lies what our eyes cannot see, skin cannot feel and consciousness cannot absorb.”

A parting thought in the middle of ordinary time
flesh wants to stay but the heart wants to soar
inside a broken temple the intervals of misery persist,
and so she flies into a world, untouchable as the dawn;
She is a castaway in a land far away
a daydreamer disentangled from the rip tide of reality
a torn vessel gliding through a shroud, most High.
Forty cubits long and twenty cubits wide
she fits in the palm of His hand, like a small Jesus.
It takes three hundred Sacred Angels
to appease her ear-shattering cries
Each time she flies here to this place,
her wistful sadness disappears.

This is a place where all good girls go to die
where the agatat sound of a tearing veil
and the arcanum whisper of God prevails,
a place where a child is heard and paried, in love.


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 Reviews of "Veiled"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on May 21, 2024
THE COMPLEXITIES FOR ONE TO PERSEVERE IN THIS WORLD, ESPECIALLY FOR THE ABANDONED, CANNOT EASILY BE REVEALED. BUT, FOR SURE...WHEN ONE FOLLOWS 'HIS' LEAD TO REACH 'BEYOND THE VEIL' TO THAT PLACE OF PEACE AND STRENGTH...THE 'MIRACULOUS' IS FOUND AND THE LOVE OF GOD PREVAILS TAKING ONE THROUGH IT ALL. AMEN. THANKS FOR SHARING, MYSTIC. LOVE, BLESSSNGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on April 4, 2024
The image of so many angels almost scared me away from reading, but I’m glad that didn’t happen, because this contains some chewy concepts, Mystic, such as: “inside a broken temple the intervals of misery persist,” by far my favorite line. The last stanza had me in the dictionary with ‘agatat’ and ‘arcanum’ and ‘paried’ — I love poetry that puts me in the dictionary. Thank you*. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 2, 2024
I can understand wanting to look beyond reality into a world conjured up by prophets of the past in the form of their reimagining, but I cannot fit the idea of a vessel, that large having any purpose when one is mind traveling.

What need of sweet chariots 40 cubits by 20 cubits to swing low?

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 1, 2024
The image of lifting the veil is a beautiful one, to reveal all those realities, some of which imagined here, that we cannot see with the physical eye, realities that lies beyond the veil. Reality reimagined.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 31, 2024
Some interesting images, Vienna. "a daydreamer disentangled from the rip tide of reality" is a unique phrase. Thanks for sharing. r


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