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Down
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Down down down
Feel like a clown
Taken all from me
What I hoped could be

Let life go
From what I know
Nothing left to grip
Keep stiff upper lip

I don't want to live
Some cannot forgive
Let me go from life
I have not for strife

So let's let it end
End down down down
Feel like a clown
Ending down down down

 

Jane Noponen Perinacci


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 Reviews of "Down"
Reviewed by Teresa Walker
Reviewed on March 26, 2013
This really touched me Jane...today I had one of these days and absolutely remembered the words from Job...why was I even created? Then I read the end of Job and that the miracles and blessings always come right after we have gone through the storm.
I felt this poem through and through..if I can say anything to you it is that you aren't alone, we love your work on authorsden and don't you forget it!I wrote the poem "A Life Changed" feeling this same way..chin up girlfriend...lets stick together!!!

Your friend!
Teresa

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 26, 2013
To quote what you once said to me; this TOO shall pass...(hopefully) e

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 26, 2013
Let's just chalk it up as a bout with menopause. In 5 minutes everything will be all better. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 26, 2013
down but not out fight and claw for the up, up, up and spit in thier face
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 26, 2013
Hope you don't mean this.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 25, 2013
Powerful poem begging for some relief from the slings and arrows that life throws at you. Hang in there and stay loose.

George


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