Could I write a poem that would hum
The low hum of tympani drum
Changing elevations of sound
Ear precision
Hold close your ear to the tight skin
Foot motion determines within
What sound fine ear seeking has found
Flowing like large river to lake
Live incision
Big bass drum he wants phtoshoot
Some rap sound grabbed onto Tymp's boot
Hearing sound like a baying hound
Voice intrusion
To me, those are typos (since you asked) but since I know the context and what you are trying to express, the meaning is not affected. That being "said," I am also a perfectionist and like it very much when people are kind enough to let me know of my typos that I did not notice. Interesting poem that makes me read it again and think, by the way. Love and best wishes to you, Jane.
I CAN'T HELP YOU, GIRL...TYPOS JUST DON'T STAND OUT FOR ME, MAYBE - A COUPLE OF DAYS LATER(SMILE). BUT GETTING BACK TO THIS LITTLE TIDDY ON DRUMS, GREAT WORK! I DIDN'T KNOW YOU WERE INTO...DRUMS. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
While foot stomping seems to be a part of old German piano accordion playing, I'm trying to wrap my head around a foot be used to guide timpani beats. Perhaps they do. But I do know that bass drums usually have a foot pedal.
Did I spell everything right? While doing these voice responses, I often find that I inserted the wrong word that might look like a typo. But actually it's a voiceo. ;-)
Answer: Yes, and then some. Drums are magical somehow and their sound is varied and unique. Drums have been known to serve as a means of communication. If your drums hum, it seems they are at peace and feel contentment. This poem hums. John
I had to to online with Tympani to see if it was spelled correctly, I already knew what it was. It s spelled correctly. And that, my friend, just beats the band.
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To me, those are typos (since you asked) but since I know the context and what you are trying to express, the meaning is not affected. That being "said," I am also a perfectionist and like it very much when people are kind enough to let me know of my typos that I did not notice. Interesting poem that makes me read it again and think, by the way. Love and best wishes to you, Jane.
Regis
Always,
Deborah
....M Thanks for the kind review, I made changes in the poem again.
"DoNotOpenTillChristmas"
Did I spell everything right? While doing these voice responses, I often find that I inserted the wrong word that might look like a typo. But actually it's a voiceo. ;-)
Ron
about the drum.
You've got the write beat,
to make it hum.
Michael D.
What Typos!?
Just Keep On Writing That Good Stuff!
TRASK...
Love the beat and the hum of precision to capture in detail the heartbeat
of verse.
Lady Mary Ann