Let Me Take Away your Pain (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Let Me Take Away your Pain
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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For Karla, I want to see you pain free and can only do just "so much"...ed

Let Me Take Away your Pain… That’s right; let me take away your pain, And give it to someone I disdain, I wish not herein to make you think I do feign, But then again, I really don’t want to see anyone this pain, attain… Bad karma may ensue; enough I have in past accrued, Please understand, I don’t want to make you misconstrue , My desire herein is to see you walk and talk and feel renewed, For you are my friend & confidant, the one whom I talk to when blue… So keep this in mind, I will burn a black candle for the rest of time, To keep you from feeling any pain, to transfer it to someone of slime, What I do for you is not in any way, shape or form, a crime, I just want you not to feel the pain, to find peace, as you are in your prime… © ed ~ 7/12/04

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 12, 2004

what a sweet, caring poem, ed; you are too much! thanks for caring for my twin; that means so much to me (and to her!)! bless your peapickin' li'l heart!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

this is a saver! :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

(((ed)))

awwwwwwwww this is beautiful--thank you for your encouragement and prayers

feeling some better today (monday), so i know it must be working :)

((((((HUGS)))))) and love, karla.

but i think i'll stay away from skydiving--don't want to add to it LOL

Reviewed by Bobbie Hess (Reader)

Wonder what the world would be like if others thought this way? Hope Rufuz is better and figure that is "to whom" you are speaking. When someone cares, the pain is less. Thanks for being one who cares. b

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

You are definitely a kind hearted soul, Ed, and a marvelous friend.

PS Will you be posting a list of the 'Slime' you refer to?

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

You are a wonderful friend!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on July 11, 2004

Devoted friendship; how fine! Marvelous emotion in this nicely crafted verse.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Precious write Ed!!

Wish I could just take the whole worlds pain away myself!!

All we can do right now is take hands and pray!!

Oh Ya...Good morningto you...You did not wake me with your Wacky music....okay...lol!!

Now it's your sleeping time..let me go put the music on.....EXTRA LOUD!!!

Love Tinka