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In A Perfect World
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A 'good-bye' poem to an abusive father in lieu of attending a funeral.

In A Perfect World By: Mary M. Romero You were the donor Y chromosome to my mother’s X that helped bring me to life. My father would have wanted me….in a perfect world. The pain you caused by abusing your wife was nothing compared to that of the abuses and neglect times five for life. My father would have loved me…in a perfect world. No tears of joy, only tears of pain, a heart tattered and torn over and over again. Learning so young about lies and deceit, of not being able to trust or be complete. My father would have protected me…in a perfect world. Your anger and denial need not be explained. The Lord has set me free from the misery and pain. My family is sacred to a heart that has learned; truths are the roots to trust, and love can be returned. My father would have been proud of me…in a perfect world. I no longer need, nor want, your idea of acceptance or love. To me, you vanished with the shedding of my last tear long ago, along with the knowledge that you will never know… My father could have known a wonderful soul…in a perfect world. I wish you peace on your journey to the afterlife

Reviewed by Mary Romero

Reviewed on March 4, 2014

Thank you so much for your words of encouragement, Jan. The pain has turned into promise that with faith, hope, friendship, knowledge, and love, we all can overcome any obstacle! I wrote this poem not only for myself but, for the many voices who feel they have yet to be heard. Many blessings to you,
Mary

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup

Reviewed on March 3, 2014

I realize such pain is indelibly imprinted upon you, Mary, that it will always be part of who you are ... yet hope this poem is the first step in moderating its effect on your life. I see for certain that you have stepped outside the 'cycle' of abuse that haunts all of our societies and wish you the support of knowledgeable, caring friends. Courageous work you've done, and must keep on doing. Be well. Jan

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 2, 2014

It is sad to know that you were abused. I hope you are through with that chapter with this poem and then move on beyond it, making sure that that kind of abuse is ended for everyone.

Ron

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on March 1, 2014

such a raw and naked write...kudos to you mary...this moving piece came from the heart of a strong, moving-forward and compassionate women that in 'a perfect world' her father might have known.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

I could have written that about my mother. In fact I have written it about my mother.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

it is good you could get past the pain caused and move on with a good life
budd