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Filthy Rags
by Elizabeth Proske → (All Poetry by Elizabeth Proske)
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Here I am, it's me, Lord, to remind You once again

Of what a pure and selfless little Christian I have been.

I read my Bible every day and keep almost every rule.

I don't smoke or drink or curse, I teach kids in Sunday School.

I prayed with Sister Gertrude even though it was quite late,

And did you notice the amount I put in the offering plate?

Surely I'm Your favorite, and I deserve some special blessing,

For all the things I've done for You, and for all the fun I'm missing?

 

Does it fill You with disgust, or is it pity that You feel,

Do You roll Almighty Eyes and say to me, “Get real!”

When I parade my works before You as if I could somehow pay

For my own entrance into Heaven on that final judgement day?

My “filthy rags” can't cleanse me, that's why Jesus had to die.

It took the sacrifice of One so much holier than I

To wash away the sin only the Blood of Jesus can erase.

Your forgiveness can't be earned, it's only given by Your grace.

 

Forgive me, Lord, for acting as if You need my sorry “help”

When Your Word makes it plain I could never justify myself.

Thank You for not keeping score, because I'd never win

If I tried to do enough good things to balance out my sin.

Please help me to remember that any good that I might do

Is not what saves, it's just to show the world a piece of You.

Don't let me be a “good girl” to feed my smug, self-righteous pride

But let me serve You out of love, so You'll be glorified.

Let your light so shine before men, that they may see your good works and glorify your Father in heaven. Matthew 5:16

For by grace you have been saved through faith, and that not of yourselves; it is the gift of God, not of works, lest anyone should boast. Ephesians 2:8-9


 

 


 

 

 


 


 


 

 


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 Reviews of "Filthy Rags"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on October 8, 2013
Excellent rhyme and flow The message is even greater THe love that Jesus had for his father is proof of that...As God sent his son Jesus to die for our sins...Jesus had faith in his fathers word that he would be resurrected It is his good deeds that earned his place and set an example for all of us

Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on October 6, 2013
Well rhymed and reads well. What I most like is the lesson, which we all must learn in one way or another, about the sin of pride; maybe the worst sin of all and one in which all of us must admit guilt at one time or another, even the best of us. A moral trap so easy to fall into, so human and so long term in its consequences. Thank you for posting this to remind us all Elizabeth. Bob

Reviewed by Cindy Wyatt
Reviewed on September 29, 2013
Beautiful poem and so true, salvation all by grace, we don't deserve it, and are own works are filthy rags. I pray souls will get saved through your witness.

Cindy

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 24, 2013
Very thoughtful and interesting. I sense a bit of rebellion here that is good. Once fully captured by the cult of Jesus Christ, it's difficult to think rationally after that.

Ron

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on September 23, 2013
Ingenious how this poem falls upwards with its build up.
Great rhythmic flow.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on September 23, 2013
Wow! I love your poem.

May peace be with you and the Lords Blessings Adorn you,

John Michael

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 23, 2013
such a fine piece
budd

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on September 22, 2013
I love it, Elizabeth!
I just met with a young friend in the grocery store today, and was so happy to have a mini-visit with her in the aisle there. It's always exciting to meet her because she shows the world a piece of the Lord, as you have said. In fact, I want to send her your poem...I'm sure she'll love it, too!

Hugs,
Connie


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