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Komori, for Dra Maria Carmen Estelles Valls, with long-owed thanks
by T. Wignesan → (All Poetry by T. Wignesan)
Thursday, July 21, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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The body dares not face the camera
The frontal posture is not for the servant...


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Komori

for Dra Maria Carmen Estelles Valls, Hospital Nino Jesus, Madrid, with long-owed thanks

The komoris' eyes fix the camera
from around
and in the straining double bandoliers' hump
the babies shaven heads strain


The body dares not face the camera
The frontal posture is not for the servant

heads turned bent regards meek and in stress
hair hastily gathered in the dark
now straggly with their loads


and in the eked-out smiles
the years of sleeplessly fading pallid faces

the rough cotton kimono
drab thick resistant to baby-faeces and crachat


And in their stilted sandals
their meagre dignity in a stoop

the bare adolescent feet still showing


Whose mothers are whose children?




Notes

"KOMORI is a generic term that consists of a noun, ko (a child), and a verb, moru (to protect or to take care of); Japanese use it to refer to any person, male or female, old or young, who takes care of children. (...) Like their European counterparts, nursemaids and nannies, komori began to appear in what Michel Foucault has called the "discourse of power" in the late nineteenth century..."
from Mariko Asano Tamanoi's "Songs as Weapons: The Culture and History of Komori (Nursemaids) in Modern Japan", in The Journal of Asian Studies, 50, no.4 (November 1991): 793-817.


© T.Wignesan March 9, 1992

[from the collection : longhand notes: a binding of poems. Paris: 1999] First posted on Poetrysoup.com (Don't buy BLIND MAN'S LANTERN, you now know the reason:Deliberate errors and omissions.)

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 Reviews of "Komori, for Dra Maria Carmen Estelles Valls, with long-owed thanks"
Reviewed by T. Wignesan
Reviewed on July 23, 2022
Touché ! Monseigneur Don RON ! Right on ! Perspicace ! But then, there must be a reason for the shaven heads which could escape us both. Perhaps it was just to stop the babies from pulling one another's hair during their sumo-bumpings on the tatami while the Komoris were catching their much-needed shut-eyes??? Have a great day pulling your hair out trying to figure this one out. Best. Wignesan

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 23, 2022
Good question. Once you turn over your child to a Komori and they care for your children 24 hours a day, bonding with them, like you don't, wouldn't it be strange if they ended up thinking of their beloved Komori as their mother? Not at all. Shaving babies heads would be a sacrilege, only done by monks to keep from having to have hair being one of the characteristics of determining the identity of an individual.

Ron


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