Well there is your photo, where are you?
I see your face but who are you now?
Somewhere inside between the pale skin
I bet your memory lies in wait, just sitting
My face has taken on many forms since then
But I am still wearing freckles and barefoot
I still love to sit in the sun but now it rots my skin
I love to smell the forest and just hear the wind
Did you let earth and man destroy your mind?
Imagination is all we have that’s ours let it run
Do you still sit in the woods? Do you draw?
Writing purifies the soul cleanse it daily, I do
Why have you chosen to hide from life?
This is your only chance to experience it
Good or bad we learn and then grow clear
Later we’ll analyze, this isn’t a dress rehearsal
So the spirits say live look about breath in
Ignore the warped all around they are lost
You still have time to feel and create beauty
Don’t waste your body it has the gift of touch
Later you will look about at the blind wondering
Their self felt veil leaves them from seeing all
Open up now while sitting in the skin and expand
After its dust again you will wish you had lived
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Reviews of "You Had Lived"
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2006
"Writing purifies the soul cleanse it daily..."
Wow. This one is profound.
This is truely a great write and as we seek the ones we loved and lost this photo combination with your work is perfect blend. Well done my pretty friend.
Art, science, wisdom and knowledge mingle here in "You Had Lived"... It is a poetic-philosophic composition on the arcane of eternity through ontologic now... A vision of intuition supporting the imagination of a heedful observer.
I enjoyed the contents and the presentation of "You Had Lived".
So the spirits say live look about breath in
Ignore the warped all around they are lost
Marvelous advice, and a marvelous photograph, Theresa.
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2006
This is uplifting and affirmative to the need for spirituality wonderful photo and poetry.
"Did you let earth and man destroy your mind?
Imagination is all we have that’s ours let it run
Do you still sit in the woods? Do you draw?
Writing purifies the soul cleanse it daily, I do "
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Wow. This one is profound.
Imagination is all we have that’s ours let it run"
outstanding poetry, Theresa ...
It makes me smile even as I feel the piquing myself. :))
Gina
The photo is perfect...
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
Ron
After its dust again you will wish you had lived"
Thank you for sharing the wisdom within your verses, Theresa. Love and peace to you,
Regis
I have to get busy now for sure..
Thanks always for your support...
love & peace......ron
Felix
Art, science, wisdom and knowledge mingle here in "You Had Lived"... It is a poetic-philosophic composition on the arcane of eternity through ontologic now... A vision of intuition supporting the imagination of a heedful observer.
I enjoyed the contents and the presentation of "You Had Lived".
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Ignore the warped all around they are lost
Marvelous advice, and a marvelous photograph, Theresa.
"Did you let earth and man destroy your mind?
Imagination is all we have that’s ours let it run
Do you still sit in the woods? Do you draw?
Writing purifies the soul cleanse it daily, I do "
Ty for sharing :)
Thanks for sharing the wisdom and beauty of it all!!
Love Tinka
Miss your work!
Love,
Eileen
TRASK
Beautifully penned, there is sage advice in your words; well done! Nice to see you again; I've missed you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.