I feel the crisp morning air gently touch
Oh the smell of the dawn to my senses
This day will stay within my memory
As I sit in peace I hope it lasts through
City streets and noise bombards me
Think back to a different day remember
When was it peaceful? I go back to then
Oh I feel the crisp fresh morning again
My memory hasn’t failed quite yet it seems
Please let me smell the lake at dawn
Hear the birds sing in praise to the day
As this city on the outside seems stressed
What a wonderful piece and love this piece because at instances when we feel worn out we should just be peaceful. Thanks for the inspiring and uplifting message. One love
My memory hasn’t failed quite yet it seems
Please let me smell the lake at dawn
Hear the birds sing in praise to the day
As this city on the outside seems stressed
My inner mind makes it Peaceful
What a gorgeous picture..makes me want to dive into my screen.. Great write.
Magnificent, moving photo, Theresa. "smell the lake at dawn" <--- you let me do that and I thank you..I felt myself inhaling deeply when reading that line.. This entire write created a longing in me to be exactly where you are in this poem.. thank god for the imagination and for this beautiful description to enhance it.. truly moving. katy.
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2003
Beautiful. Sigh. I needed that!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2003
I can be around a lot of noise and can still be at peace. Wonderful write and photo.
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Please let me smell the lake at dawn
Hear the birds sing in praise to the day
As this city on the outside seems stressed
My inner mind makes it Peaceful
What a gorgeous picture..makes me want to dive into my screen.. Great write.
Glad to read you again
Love
Tinka
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