~*~This is the 3rd Poem I posted on AD, on the 19 May 2004. Perhaps some of you may well have read and commented on it, "Thank You" for any who haven't read it, your comments would be extremely welcome~*~
~*~Thank you all for your loving support always~*~
Sentient Love
Take me now, draw me near
Embrace me gently, hold me dear
For tender love I seek tonight
To fill the void that lies agape.
Feel my heart, see it pound,
My senses reel with passionate sound-
Feel me quiver in your embrace;
Hold me feel me, and keep me close.
Soon we will the dance of love,
But for now lets both enjoy
Sentient love, thrown our way.
Gently now I stroke your face,
Your hands, my body begin to trace.
In every inch you want to find,
Desires that have been un-mined.
Can we control, the burning fire?
Let our souls now both aspire.
A cowgirl for a while I’ll be
And ride the pleasures offered me.
Leave the ride I long to fly
Just like a sun kissed butterfly.
Two have now become as one,
In this sea of gentle waves,
Rushing forth and back again
Constant motion to and fro.
We’ve found our rhythm and our beat.
With each new wave the crest will rise
Then the foam will ride the crest.
The tide now eases and then subsides,
The ocean once again lies still !
Elga~Indigo All Rights Reserved
4 May 2004
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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2004
Sensual and passionate write.
Loved the line with being a cowgirl for a while.....
Superb!
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2004
Elga...wonderful repost...I remember this the first time and like fine wine it gets better each time you pop the cork for another sip...great art and great poetry...Fletcher B
Elga, This is such an eloquent, sensual write! The artwork and the poetry are exceptionally beautiful, Dear Poet! ...Breathtaking! Thank you for sharing (and reposting) this treasure!
Cynthia
Reviewed by R Jay Slais (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2004
So very warm and passionate write Elga,
loved this poem and the graphic is awesome too!!
I loved this poem and the art, so beautifully done!
Glad you reposted, Elga!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2004
Extreamly passionate.
Nice of him to save her from drowning, like that....
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2004
Elga, this is a beautifully well-written passionate composition that excites the spirit. The mind truly can sometimes give more relief and pleasure to the soul than the actual event. I am glad you reposted this incredible masterpiece my friend. Thank you for sharing your wonderful creations.
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Loved the line with being a cowgirl for a while.....
Superb!
soft sweet and tender
thanks for sharing
William ...peace
Dreams are good friends and the ocean the best!!
Love Tinka
Cynthia
loved this poem and the graphic is awesome too!!
:)
Firestarter
breathtakingly beautiful--this is exceptional! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Both the poetry visuals and the graphic are super!
That has to be one of the best lines I've ever read. S'good thing you reposted this or I would have missed it. And then where would I be?
Glad you reposted, Elga!
Nice of him to save her from drowning, like that....
(really cool graphic)
In good taste
Peter