passion surging and burning pulsating every fibre every living cell warmth exuding every pore desires all running wild motions of love floating the waves heaving, receding now growing stronger sensual heat rising surrounding us burning our very core entwined in fervour from our lips a murmur desperately urging exhilaration, intoxication rousing arousal electrical energies rapturous moment excitation stimulation inspiration exaltation pitch of excitement now here !
Copyright Elga ~Indigo~ September 2004 - all rights reserved
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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2004
What a wonderful, passionate write.
A joy to read.
Oh my, Elga! You did it now. Everyone will have
melted monitors! A superb sensual delight, filled
with the utmost passion. Wondrous!;-)
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
Elga, this is an absolute powerhouse of perfected passionate poetry, my friend. Where is the fire department when you need it? It’s a good thing I have my fans working overtime or my PC would melt. Simply an incredible creation. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
Blimey O'reilly, what a fast moving, hot hot hot poem, thank gosh for the last day of summer breeze..
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A joy to read.
*WOW*!!!!!!!! this one catches your attention--hot, hot, hot! excellent graphic and write--enjoyed :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Take Care,
Chuckie
(now where's that water cooler?) *smile*
Allen
melted monitors! A superb sensual delight, filled
with the utmost passion. Wondrous!;-)
One fantastic, compassionate write - beautiful piece ... love the incredible artwork!
Robert
sueb
Love
Peter
Very well written. If we could only bottle some of that heat we could set the world on fire.