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Filter these Tears...
In sleepless nights, and thoughts of you,
no forgotton moments, ever slip through,
when my eyes close, for the briefest time,
my mind is so filled with dreams divine.
But my awakening hour, is like a dark sunrise,
that filters these tears, through saddened eyes,
knowing so well, where you'll be today,
doesn't really leave me much to say.
As I sit here, and wait like you,
I 'll pray to God, that it isn't true ,
but somehow deep within my core,
my heart will break a little more.
Both you and I really suspect the truth,
this malevolent growth still in it's youth.
though sad I am, but there's plenty of hope,
and I know within that you'll thrive and cope.
A kidney less, but you'll survive with one,
never feel that you have been outdone,
be robust, have faith, within your soul,
understand now, that you'll reach the goal !
~*~
Copyright Elga ~Indigo~
5 October 2004 - all rights reserved
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i felt this one to my soul--powerful, heartwrending emotional write--well done, with excellent meter and rhyme! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Your a dear heart. Hope everything goes well for your friend. I'll keep em in my prayers. God Bless.
Nicely written..
you have such wonderful talent! I hope things are brighter and happier for you soon!
Sending hope and best wishes to you and your friend,
Carolyn
blessin's and peace 2 U Elga, there is mystic beauty in this write of yours.
cynth'ya lewis reed
Peter
i hope all will work out ...
Love & prayers,
Patty
I sometimes wonder why we must suffer
so in this life, someone wiser than I
could perhaps say. I do feel your pain
Elga!
This very poignant line defines the tone of your poem. Heartfelt, and touching -- hope all is well.
Carmen :-)
hope all is well........
A
beautiful write as well
Love Tinka
Be strong and keep the faith things will be ok.
Peace
vesna :) oxoxo