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Figment of Failure
Sadness now lies in the wings of shadows,
casting pain, on the fragile tender heart,
pained expression, on a face that now shows
elusive thoughts, of ghosts that seem to dart.
Guarded heart of one who fears cutting ire,
thus no sin committed, but for thought alone;
figment of failure - now burning like fire,
whilst tears stride onwards, trying to atone.
Oft angrily sounding, but not so meant,
reverence expressed - avoidance now seen,
to hell and back this heart and soul were sent,
misunderstanding, that life's not routine.
Life and love together you should employ,
the past now gone - strive for lifes' peace and joy.
~*~
Copyright Elga ~Indigo~
14 December 2004 - All Rights Reserved
02H04pm
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A beautiful expression for your friend. I am sorry for his loss. Your ability to express such deep emotion in this soothing, touching poetic form is truly an art you have mastered well. Thank you for sharing your magnificent talent.
Cynthia
Best wishes
HH
... Michael
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
very moving & beautiful poetry ...
remembrance and compassion, for your friend.
Exquisite poetry!
i'm sorry for your loss. :(
a beautiful, moving, deeply felt write--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :( >tears <