Can we keep away from the most basic human desire? ... love ;)
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Elga
Love
'Tis strange what a man may do, and a woman yet think him an angel.
William Makepeace Thackeray (1811–1863)
Love isn't like a reservoir. You'll never drain it dry. It's much more like a natural spring. The longer and the farther it flows, the stronger and the deeper and the clearer it becomes.
Eddie Cantor (1892–1964)
Magic Crystal
I sense the power through Magic Crystal
The warmth exuded in your caress
The tenderness you have and show
When I feel your hands upon my breasts.
Within the realms of dancing skies
The joy that’s bubbling deep inside
I feel your whisper soft and warm
As you exhale at my side.
A rapturous enlightened moment
Caught in this ebb and flow
They’re those feelings deep within
The sensualness that glows.
Floating on golden wings
Like an eagle soaring high
Motion in our souls
Carried on loving sighs
Flying through the mist of clouds
Raindrops soft upon our skin
Soothe within the raging fire
Are we ending… or do we just begin?
I love your poem.It's relaxing to read and soothing to the mind.
And the words such carress,dancing skies..really engender an aura of The intimate. Great write. Anne pawlak.
There is a sense of the 'Magic Crystal' in your writings, Elga, an elan of warm, sensual wisdom, furthered by an ability to create and craft such lovely images, strung and woven into a flowing skirt of sparkling facets, angles and crystal faces of shimmering beauty.
As always your words speak of passion, love and just a little fear of what lies aheadbut also as always so beutifully expressed that it invites us into your heart.
Felix
Reviewed by Pacific Ink (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2005
A beautiful poem, Indigo~Elga!
Pacific Ink
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2005
Poof goes the wonderous words you penned as the poem came to an end, but then, foop (poof backwards) the lovely words boomeranged right back within my sould, to set there forever. good stuff.
Dear Elga,
This is magical. Beautiful presentation complimented by beautiful expression. Great use of metaphor and visual imagery. I found the ending to be somewhat poignant...a question you wish to have answered. May all that you wish for yourself be yours.
With love
Chanti
Gorgeous package Elga, all complementary to the whole. The question is an eternal one, is this just the beginning or is it the end? Are the whispers that we leave upon the wind, today, like a deep-set stain unto our future?
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And the words such carress,dancing skies..really engender an aura of The intimate. Great write. Anne pawlak.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Exquisite, my lady! A most beautiful work--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
nice work Elga
Ron
so beautifully worded
excellent piece
enjoyed much
William ......Peace & Love
Felix
Pacific Ink
This is magical. Beautiful presentation complimented by beautiful expression. Great use of metaphor and visual imagery. I found the ending to be somewhat poignant...a question you wish to have answered. May all that you wish for yourself be yours.
With love
Chanti
Take care,
Sherry
Love Tinka
Love,
Eileen
Paul;-)
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Agnel :o)