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More Than Just Years
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" Be Fluid and Flexible To Succeed.".


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It is a dream we are within


Never doubt it for a moment


Fleeting flashbacks flicker like a crackling fire


As we swirl and swirl through symbiotic time


Thinking we are awake when we are in fact dead


It will all be revealed when we're no longer there


 


It is more than just years


That you are experiencing


Tis a test that you have been given


Your dreams may very well come true


Depends on just how clever you think you are


If you are, you'll interrupt your thinking


And adopt the spontaneous approach


 


Listen to the lapping seawaves


Relentless and purposeful in synchronicity


No ego controls the motion


Dappling sunshine visits in silence


And blankets the mountainside still


Be like water my friend


And fill every crevice you find


 


Copyright by Peter Paton 2005


 


 


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 Reviews of "More Than Just Years"
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on December 19, 2005
Deep!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 19, 2005
Quite profound, Peter - and that truly is a most captivating graphic.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
Some wonderful lines!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
i totally agree with the premise of this poem ... success is the ability to spontaneously create our reality within the expanding parameters of the living dream we live within, without the input of the ego, to prevent our creative efforts from coming into being ...

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
Be like water my friend
And fill every crevice you find

indeed Peter ..indeed..

exceptional write


Vesna:)



Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
The final stanza says it all. Great spiritual advice.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
now this was inspiring!! I love it!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
Peter this is most thought provoking and intriguing. It is also full of wisdom and besides all that it is splendid poetic imagery!
Thanks for sharing!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
How well you have said it, and I couldn't agree more. The pic is awesome.

Reviewed on December 18, 2005
Wow, Peter!
"Be like water my friend
And fill every crevice you find"
This write is truly befitting to this one... Thank you for sharing this....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 18, 2005
Your words are filled with wisdom and truth, Peter. This is an excellent offering, thank you.
Take care,
Sherry


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