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" In answer to Joseph's Challenge, the Portugese Tres Linhas ( Three Lines ) which is a worthy and laudable format that may well supersede the haiku

All three lines must rhyme in syllables of 5, 6 & 7, respectively. Should also contain imagery that celebrates some sort of connection between nature and spirit.

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Sweet angel of mine

you make my heart feel fine

beautiful star so sublime

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006

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Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2006

Thanks for responding to the challenge, Peter! And what a splendid job you did on your first attempt!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 2, 2006

Sweet loving piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

Lovely, Peter, just lovely! Very well done; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

Beautiful job with Joseph's new format. Very well done!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

Sweet and lovely, a beautiful answer to the challenge Peter!
This could be a great song if you add some lyrics;-)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

Now This Is Hot Romantic Poetry....

TRASK

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

You "done good" sweet Peter.

susan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

Aw, you big old softie, you. But then I knew that. Very nicely done.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

Sweet and wonderful, perfection all the way!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

((((Heavenly, you make the angels sing, as always Peter)))))

Love From A Dove

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

You hit it on the barrel head, Peter.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on May 1, 2006

excellent, Peter!

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