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A Glimpse Inside
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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Do not calculate the length of time you have spent in the company of the Lord's Name, and exult. Calculate rather the length of time you have wasted, away from that contact, and repent. Have that Name ever in your thoughts and you can brave any calamity.

 

Bhagwan Sri Sathya Sai Baba

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A suspended silence permeates the slumbering forest

as I tread my way cautiously across the sphagnum moss terrain

careful not to disturb or alarm any resident creatures within my scope

coinciding my feelings with the innate harmony of the still wood

listening intently for the subtle promptings of my heart

which never fails to keep my thoughts and actions both pure and intrinsic

a red squirrel appears suddenly, skipping effortlessly across the overhead branches

teaching me that to be natural and spontaneous is the vital key

as shards of golden sunshine fragmented diffusion on the leaves

all around the brilliant phlox and foxgloves, provided a welcome spree to the eye

just then a dog fox came prowling, sniffing assiduously the downwind breeze

he didn't even notice me, as I stood stock still against a birch tree

blending into my environment, with no sudden movement or noise

heaven's gates opened up for me, while I whispered your name in grace

I am a man who leads from the front, multi faceted in my ways

and when I give my heart away, you can be sure that destiny has moved

for when I reached the fork in the trail

I heard your voice say,.... I agree

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
   

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 Reviews of "A Glimpse Inside"
Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on July 12, 2006
A captivating write, earthy and natural. Loved the imagery, aided by the outdoor photo!

Lena

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2006
This gives so very much...beautifully soothing and uplifting Peter!
:) Panda

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 2, 2006
In the forest, either fork is good. But donot listen to the forked tongue.

Ron

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2006
Dear Peter,

Thanks for sharing this glimpse of your beautiful heart.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on July 2, 2006
I can hear the twigs breaking under your feet, smell the moss, stop dead in my tracks at the sight of the tiny fox so alert....and from the looks of the photograph, I believe I could look into the woods outside my window and see you there on a closer walk with God. I know just the place, and I've seen the fox there.
Love,Taylor~


Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 2, 2006
A spiritually uplifting poetic expression of faith; thank you for sharing it, Peter. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 2, 2006
Thank you for sharing thid tranquil moment...awesome write....your faith here shines so very bright!!

Been there....at this spot being one with nature!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
No forks in your road from this poem, i think...good to be strong in your faith...ed

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
This is a stunning beauty, Peter! Your images are so vivid I felt as though I walked beside you.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
This is, as always, inspiring! I need these gentle reminders of centering myself, remembering the Divine...


Susan

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
I felt I was there with you in this marvelous write.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
the will of the creation offers many avenues to venture on, i see you have chosen wisely ...


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
Peter Paton you are one hell of a man! I love your attitude, and your poetry! Thank you for sharing it with us!

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
((((Peter ))))

you always show your true soul self to your readers.. This is stunning…The gift of imagery falls in the gifts of high knowledge in the fruits of the spirit.. It simply is stunning. When we all can come to the place where our Lord Jehovah and us rein, we are gathered and guided into all kinds of rays of healing, deliverance, agape and special knowledge through the prophetic anointing.. Masterpiece! THANK YOU ANGEL!

Peace & Love, Dove

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
You took us on a mind-trip here, whatever the reason and whatever the religion or feeling, it was a good feel of mind at peace with itself.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
Excellent...

TRASK

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
the verse "Be still and know that I am God" comes to mind in this wonderful poetic piece Peter.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
In the calm of the forest we are closer to our Creator and he notices our prayers better I think. I am always inspired when I have the forest surrounding me too Peter.The stress of the world seems to disappear and my respect for my environment comes fuill circle. The pgoto is so green that I'm sure I've been here many times. I can smell it ....and thank you for being you Peter. It's womderful to share likenesses of our bountiful earth, live worlds apart and share the same beauty in familiar ways. God is Good!

Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
Your poetry is so like an open love letter, be it to a special one or more widely strewn
Always gental, and loving, and so visual
I like reading you Peter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Gives my heart a smile!!!

And thats the nicest place for a smile to start, for thats a true smile

ty
:) < < <see

pax A

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on July 1, 2006
Peter,
Every man...needs a woman...to back him 100%...even while invisible, at his side.

It surely sounds like you have found yours! No wonder, you write such Excellent Poetry, and provide such enchanting photography....

Congratulations, on whatever mutual decision[s] you may have come to!

Makes me think of the scripture: "How can two walk together - except, they be of one accord."

Conversely, many couples walk at the same place, at the same pace, and at the same time...yet are completely... out of sync.

Well done! love & prayers Rhonda


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