Your belated Earth Day poem and metaphor is a damned good one, my friend! We all need to start revering Earth's trees before it's too late. And since tomorrow is Arbor Day, I plan on planting a few more.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2008
Wonderful writing sweet Fee,very well done indeed..have a wonderful and safe day...HUgsss
What it took hundred of years to grow, man can destroy in a minute.
When a tree fall in the forest and nobody is there...yes, it makes a sound, the last scream of an executed innocent.
Thank goodness the schools are teaching children about the conservation of trees and the importznce to protect the Rain Forest. I recall when I was in first grade we never studied the Rain Forest. It starts with out children.
Love and blessings,
Susan
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Very nicely done! I love your artistic side! One of my least favorite sounds on this planet is the sound of a chainsaw - it can send me into a full-blown fit (not sure how else to describe it).
Fee - i like the tree you made -there is a good poem i read recently called 'The innocence of trees', by Bevvy at ukauthors.com where she said many things about them -i'm planting trees at the mo - plenty charities do this online if it's not pos at home, some years ago i searched Plant a Tree- those last lines are *brrr* Even when a tree it cut they contribute to life, and in my mind live, alive as shelter, table. fire, paper... -i think you are a good tree Fee, and your poems lately -well i wrote 2 musicals, one for my dad with Cash and Denver in it and then i see you wrote a musical one too, and i wrote a poem last month, Don't cut this tree! - poetry eh? Does my head in right good and proper as they say in my neck of the woods - ive recently copied a very old one Woods and Trees because i lost the edit i did -may be i will post it for you to see- take care Fee of Trees, Nicky of the Village of Sleepsalot on the Green xx
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Great analogy which transports from wonderous nature to our own human nature as well. Well Done! Deborah
A wonderful comparison to life itself for all. Yet to cut that life short seems to be such a sad shame. As a tree we grow in strength and wisdom and if used wisely we will soar.....
Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Your words hit the spot - and as Marcia pointed out - no trees, no air! We should start thinking about this in our urban planning. Well done, yet again.
I agree with Kate, here. The ending is so sad. I love trees. Flowers, I don't know one from another but a tree, I know so many personally. Excellent. Liz
This works on so many levels, Felix. Our thoughts can fly away or nest in so many of your boughs... but that ccccchhhhhainsaw buzzzz at the end... my word! It is a very sad experience that so much life is ruthlessly cut short in it's prime... through sickness, misfortune or the wantoness and greed of other men/women. A metaphor for Life that will never grow thin or cease from having meaning and depth and variety. Thank you for this, Kate xx
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Something so strong and resilient cut down so quickly by a machine-wielding human. Augh!
I very much liked your Tree word formation.
Leann
recycling is so important!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
The cycle, continues - if we'll plant - a thought provoking write, very well penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
When a tree fall in the forest and nobody is there...yes, it makes a sound, the last scream of an executed innocent.
Georg
God bless you. Kathy
Love and blessings,
Susan
Be always safe,
Karen
Much luv,
Sanja xoxo
Outstanding Fee.
Hugs,
Marcia