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the Humility of Trout Pond
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Trout Pond

 

By: Felix Perry

 

The waters still not frozen on Trout Pond

And the ground wears a mere trace of snow

Like an old ladies flimsy threadbare nightgown

Ashamed that its intimacy may show

 

 

The trees also stand naked like old strippers

Denuded of their warm colors of fall

If it weren’t for the beavers on Trout Pond

They’d surely have no audience at all

 

 

In the air a vague scent of wood smoke

Someone warming up hearth and home

I stand there alone on the bank of Trout Pond

Wishing somehow I didn’t feel so alone

 

 

I pull up my collar against the North Wind

That suddenly must have its bitter say

Turn my back on the humility of Trout Pond

Time to face another new day…

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "the Humility of Trout Pond"
Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on January 17, 2011
Thanks You for showing the beautiful picture of "Tout Pond" and for this lovely written poem, Felix. God bless!!!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 4, 2011
The metaphoric "Old ladies, Old strippers, and Beavers" had me howling you dirty old man.
How could you feel alone with all that female company?

~W~

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on January 4, 2011
You put me right there, Fee....what a beautiful spot! Peaceful and quiet....surrounded by nature....is there anything more beautiful?

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 3, 2011
This poem is so you, Fee, especially the description of the trees. Nicely done:)
Sheila

Reviewed on January 3, 2011
I really like the way this poem
is also an experience for the reader
I also am hungry for some trout

Ancient Mariners & Fish Nets
Vickie

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 3, 2011
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
I would find enjoyment on Trout Pond, just as I do when I, always alone, visit my beach & ocean...Ed

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
Well, well, Felix. Why do I have the distinct impression that you are saying much more than this poem appears to let on, and doing it with such superlatively redolent ease. I really enjoyed the tone and imagery in this one. A fine pen you've put us in... er, um... I mean put in for us!

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
a well captured moment here. wishing you a wonderful new year

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
You capture the sense of intimacy and isolation so very well, Felix, and conjure the vulnerability with such heart-warming visuals. Love the picture - looks like here at home in Dorset, literally over the road from me! :)) Many blessings now and in the year ahead. Have a good one! :)) xx

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
Fee, this is no doubt one of your best writings, so visually rich, so easy to read, but full of truths about life.

Cheers and Happy New Year,
Dan

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
Felix, this is a powerful view of self and the often stark views and reality of what a shaper of character nature can be. With observation and desire to learn, she's a powerful mentor. Humility is what you have poetically framed in this beautiful poetry. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
Fee, this one left me WANTING. Wanting for more verses, wanting to know "THE REST OF THE STORY" as Mr. Harvey would have put it. Wanting to know what that "New Day" brought with it. Nicely done.

Thanks Dick

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
Wow-love the metaphores "Like an old ladies flimsy threadbare nightgown Ashamed that its intimacy may show, fantastic writing!


Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
Beautiful Felix as I hear silence through the nakeness of Mother Nature. You've painted a lovly picture in our minds.

Love your face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
Fee, you bring us right there to Trout Pond through your descriptive narrative...I love the ending bringing us to your state of being.
Lovely work, Happy New Year!!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
One of your best Fee, this is truly a work of art..love the stillness and thoughts at trout pond~your images are unique~
Hugs,
Chrissie

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
Beautifully written.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
The dead of winter can truly make one feel all alone, but even at places like Trout Pond, Spring and New Life, will soon return.


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