A Lady Dressed in Trouble (poem) by Carole Mathys on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 13, 2012

I love the ambiance of intrigue and mystery in this, and your character is enticing as well. Thank you for sharing, Carole. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on September 20, 2012

Love this you both
Enjoyed the "Sam spade touch"
Love &peace
William

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 4, 2012

oooo... what next?! This surely is just a taster... otherwise you're BOTH in trouble!! :)) As seamless as her well-turned stocking, you two! :)) Can't wait to see what lies beyond that fringe... xx

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on April 3, 2012

oh what fun! well done, carole & jon!
blessings,
carolyn

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 2, 2012

Excellent seamless,collab...I'm looking forward to the book! Wishing you both much success and happiness!

ET

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on April 2, 2012

Very nicely done...excellent collaboration on such a great theme

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2012

Carole, This is like a film of the forties, a beautiful dame and a
detective who doesn't know any better...Love it!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on April 2, 2012

Awesome!!!! Unfolds like a 40's movie! Loved the phrasing! Each verse wraps itself around the next....well done you two!

Anna

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on April 1, 2012

I love the perspective in this, so much fun!
Glorious collaborating, you guys!
Will there be more to come? I hope so, and the book...
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 1, 2012

I felt like I was listening to an old radio narrative of a flat foot dick about to get an interesting case.

Jon Michael, she does wonders.

Ron

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 1, 2012

Excellent collab, Carole and Jon Michael!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 31, 2012

"...that husky polish
rubbed there by money"

ah, yes! and everything else
that goes with it - the disaster package
but such an enchanting alluring seductive
package

Congratulations to you both, Carole and Jon,
for this so well-written work

john

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on March 31, 2012

Ah, I wrote a forties-gumshoe novel a couple of years ago just to get it out of my system. I called it Ram Slade (Sam Spade?). Hah! Turned out to be a pretty darn good book. This delightful collaboration put me in mind of it. Great poem!

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Reviewed on March 31, 2012

If that's not background, or forefront for "Bogy". Your words bring the image immediately forward. What would this fashionably slinky broad want with a "Shamus", huh? The black bird possibly.
Good to hear from you again, Carole.
Mark