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Otter and the Five Muskrat Lodges
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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The Buckskin Skirt Oar Traveler's counterpart Fringe Water Many Bosom


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...and the five muskrat lodges
the French drained and burned
in the French and Indian assaults,
trying to sweep the red race from
their hunting grounds, fighting
over hide territory, a curse of
the fur trade.

Joe Cloud takes good measure
into the forest with a measuring
stick he made from a yard of
willow branch he took from one
of the five muskrat lodges just
before the conflict had come
full circle.  One day in the forest
he pointed to the full length of
the stick and said, "This is how
much life you have left, Daughter."
Then he indicated one inch and
said, "I have only this much left.
I know you will carry on."

"How do you know this, father?"
Fringe Water Many Bosom asks.
"How do you know that I will not
drown in the river where otter
and beaver wrestle muskrat?"

"I had a vision while on the river
coming home from the Great Lakes
fur trade.  In this vision, you collected
many loon feathers in my slumber. 
White loon will teach you how to be a
good swimmer.  You will meet a husband
and he will keep you safe from the
enemy," Joe Cloud says.  "A good
father knows this of his daughter."


Copyright 2006 firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman

  

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 Reviews of "Otter and the Five Muskrat Lodges"
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Excellent write, Sage; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Great excerpt, Sage.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on June 19, 2006
The passage of energy and creativity is a gift from a father to his siblings. So much of this is the way of my father. This one is special for me Sage.
Thank you!
Susan

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 19, 2006
Interesting story, Sage. I would have to read much more to get its full meaning.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2006
Whoa! An excerpt from "The Buckskin Skirt Oar Traveler." Gotta love it, and so I do. Joe's Cloud (sorry, couldn't hept myself) is growning heavy with life and is ready to expire. Joe knows this and is passing on the fruits of his labors and his intellect to his next of kin, his daughter, knowing that she will doo the righ thing, because, after all, she IS Joe Cloud's daughter, how could she do otherwise?

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on June 19, 2006
You have such a deep well of Native lore to draw from, Sage, and it's fascinating, the voices of the past coming thru your poems. Pity the french were so ruthless, but they got defeated in their turn, and the furry animals, well, they never win, do they?

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on June 19, 2006
Sage
Otters seem to be to the fore tonite in the Den..
Check out JoAnne Richatrdson's poem about otters...
Those otter and beaver lodges are built with great effort, labour and precision, just like your immaculate composites !
You are freewheeling Sage !
Peter


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