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The quiet of the night!
by Sandi Lyn Schraut → (All Poetry by Sandi Lyn Schraut)
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The shades of night dropped down softly


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The shades of night dropped down softly

Like billowing drapes of translucent black velvet

Falling on houses and lawns alike

Bringing with its descent a quieting of the city

 

The houses change with the fall of darkness

becoming traps that have captured daylight

and the quietude that was outside has moved inside

as the evening news is told from flickering tv screens

 

as the shade deepens the night sounds

begin to be heard from the grass and trees

crickets squeak and the mosquito hums

to his lady friend busily biting the uncovered arm

 

as the hours pass even the houses grow dark

the neighborhood sleeps, only an occasional car

takes its tired driver home, to a dark house

and only the animals of the night travel the lawns

 

it is a time of rest for most, for unrest for others

the restful sleep and recapture the energy expended

the restless are full of dread, tension and are vigilant

until the light returns, giving them comfort, and safety

 

and yet, there was no threat from the shades of black

only the light was unavailable, so why the fear?

It seems unseen foes are dreaded more then those seen, and in the quietness grow large with ominous implications


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 Reviews of "The quiet of the night!"
Reviewed by David Clure
Reviewed on January 26, 2009
I "saw" this so clear it was like watching a movie! I felt it so deeply- that my heart rang like a bell. And those last few lines...a timeless, immortal finishing touch, like the fireworks finale'.
"The quiet of the Night" is why I love poetry!!

~a fellow human and poet, Zach

Reviewed by Kathryn Seifert
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
wonderful. I can see your images. Nice poem
Kathy Seifert

Reviewed by Tom Kitt
Reviewed on April 5, 2008
Many are afraid to slow down in case they get caught? if they only knew that they are chasing themselves then they'd embrace the dark. But, there is no awareness in our time. There is little or no education on basic concepts concerning the very medium we exist within: energy. Many don't even know how a light switch works let alone how energy works to ctrol the greater landscape of life. The last line touches a primary issue of life that requires explanation. Tom

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on April 3, 2008
I love that question at the end, it poses the thought in the reader's head that maybe the dark and quiet are good, and fear is what drives its being seen as scary.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 2, 2008
Well orchestrated piece and yes, sometimes we fear the unknown more....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on April 1, 2008
Sandi,

WOW - a sense of foreboding in these wonderfully imaged lines - well done -

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
"It seems unseen foes are dreaded more then those seen,"...excellent and sometimes so very true. Beautiful writing.


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