Utaybah (poem) by Rana M on AuthorsDen

Utaybah
by Rana M → (All Poetry by Rana M)
Sunday, December 10, 2017 Rated "G" by the Author.

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Utaybah Written by Rana M Oh sweet December, remember what heaven brought us An angel emerged and delivered to us, on my doorsteps her presence indeed, applaud, cherished and celebrated The essence from heaven, walked in fairy's footsteps Still remember the moment, the first time I met her On 19th December, Utaybah came to me quietly Wrapped in snowy bright, shiny delicate blanket Eyes closed, she revolutionized my life completely I flew above clouds, over meadows & mountains Plunged into another world of excitement, suddenly Fresh as the morning glory, pure as the life itself I heard gossips of angels, discussing her beauty Having her scent more precious than lilies & roses I stared at her, shy but with utmost exuberance As soon as I kissed her forehead, she held my hand And whispered, Oh dear father, I feel your presence Pretty vigilant but fairly mild smile on her cute face Mesmerized my soul, in purely and heavenly way I mumbled, welcome ! Utaybah, my sweet daughter Beautify my world, enlighten my soul and "Stay"

Reviewed by Rana M

Reviewed on March 5, 2018

Sure thing M J Hollingshead, will try to do the same.
Thanks for reading and reviewing

Cheers

Rana

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on December 15, 2017

lovely! there is a special bond between daddy's and daughters

sez this father's daughter.

enjoyed the read!

you might want to make a copy of your poem on special paper and put away for her to carry in her wedding bouquet someday

m

Reviewed by Susanne Leist

Reviewed on December 13, 2017

The love of a father for a daughter is precious. I can feel it in your sweet words.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on December 12, 2017

a very passionate write between a father and daughter

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 11, 2017

Your poem illustrates the glorious transformation that happens to a father when his first daughter is born. It must be a wonderful experience that I haven't had--yet.

Ron

Reviewed by Mystic Rose

Your one of my favorite writers here for the mere reason that you write with such sensitive vibe that my soul undoes when I read your works. Have a great day, Rana. Even your name is poetic.

Reviewed by John Herlihy

Reviewed on December 10, 2017

Children have a ways of changing the perception of the world and everything in it. A lovely poem in tribute to child love.

Reviewed by John Domino

I'm sure the last word was meant to be "Stayed" but other than that, a wonderful poetic story that is very touching to the heart.